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I absolutely love this challege--it\'s produced so many fun stories--but I find your Hermione to be the most cannon...excellent...continue!

Shiv,

What a great premise!! I loved Hermione\'s outburst in the middle of dinner. That was awesome. I can\'t wait to read Dumbledore\'s reaction to her saying Professor Snape.

Kim

Loving the Jane Austen parallels and the deliciously evil cliffhanger ending Chapter 2. :-)

This is really good. I like Hermione poking th eMalfoy owl. I liked Dumbledore volunteering himself. I think Draco was way too nice to Hermione. He shouldn\'t lose any of his snarkiness even though they\'re in cahoots. I want to read more.

Thank you for keeping Hermione so perfectly in character. I\'ve read a number of these Marriage Law fics, and so many of them depict Hermione as a wimpy pushover. Yours is onethe the few that seems to remember that she has a hell of a temper. I\'m so happy that she\'s not forgetting that she has a prodigious brain in her haste to make it all go away. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Oh, goodness... An Evil!Dumbledore. How lovely! It\'s about time people saw what a manipulative bastard that man is. And not only am I taken with your Dumbledore, but this KickAss!Hermione is great. All too often we see this girl get shit upon and have to pick up the pieces of her life. I\'m glad that for all the fics out there that have Hermione as this weak-willed little girl in a woman\'s body making decis ths that she is unworthy of, we finally see the strong character that JKR has written for us. Thank you, Shiv, for another story actually worth reading. They are rare on the table these days.

This story is great! I think your Hermione is absolutely fabulous, and the way you question the Headmaster\'s intentions (quite justly) is very entertaining. :)

That was just so, so, so, unbelievably classic! I\'m sporting the cheesiest of grins - way to go yucky yucky nauseating
evil!Dumbledore! I didn\'t see that coming at all (uck the mental pictures of that one) so go you for having such a screamingly good plot twist. I\'m sure in the circumstances Snape will rally round......I\'m still smiling, still faintly thinking of bringing up the irish stew I just ate for dinner, and still hoping that you will keep writing this excellent story. There are so few of them - please don\'t abandon us, and I\'ll promise to review more!

Simply brilliant. That\'e ine in the eye for Albus. Dirty old mage! mak makes Draco look like Prince Charming doesn\'t it? *snort*

Damn...I knew what she was doing during that conversation with Dumbledore, but I just got a slow wide evil grin when she mentioned Severus. *cackles wildly* Beautiful, has anyone told you that you\'re brilliant? Lecherous old perv. Can\'t wait to see where you go with this, pervy!Dumbledore and sympathetic-if-snarky!Snape.