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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~~You\'ll never know how tempted I was to suddenly have her marry Draco, seduce Lucius and end up ruling the world. ~~
Certainly couldn\'t have blamed you if you did. ;)
As far as her explanation to Ron - I think you pulled that off smoothly. She gave him valid reasons, tried to say what she meant without being mean about it, and left the final decision up to him. Nicely done.
Certainly couldn\'t have blamed you if you did. ;)
As far as her explanation to Ron - I think you pulled that off smoothly. She gave him valid reasons, tried to say what she meant without being mean about it, and left the final decision up to him. Nicely done.
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv,
Great chapter!! Characterizations are excellent. I like how you made Ron more mature and Harry also. Good going!!
The A/N at the end was great. If you ever decide to write that story, I wanna read!!
Kimi
Great chapter!! Characterizations are excellent. I like how you made Ron more mature and Harry also. Good going!!
The A/N at the end was great. If you ever decide to write that story, I wanna read!!
Kimi
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4... I am looking forward to seeing the result of Ron\'s thought process, should prove interesting!!! At least Harry was more understanding about her reasons for wanting to marry Severus!!! That\'s something that I\'m REALLY looking forward to, seeing how she goes about convincing him!!! Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv! I love this! I\'m so glad you\'re back! I love the potions and their names; where do you get all your ideas? I can\'t wait to see more; your work is such an inspiration. Thank you so much.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"A/N - well there weren\'t many surprises there were there? You\'ll never know how tempted I was to suddenly have her marry Draco, seduce Lucius and end up ruling the world. \"
I want to see thlterlternate story! Excellent chapters, a dose of shiv was just what I needed.
I want to see thlterlternate story! Excellent chapters, a dose of shiv was just what I needed.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating, Shiv. I really enjoyed chapters 3 & 4. Now I\'m all excited to see how Severus is going to take Hermione\'s explanation. And although I\'d like to think that Hermione is going to propose to Severus, I wouldn\'t put it past you to change your mind to surprise us.
Cheers ~ tea and pomegranates ~ Kait x
Cheers ~ tea and pomegranates ~ Kait x
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve made my week. I\'m almost thankful that you were on holiday last week, as I would have been too tired after work to read anything. And this makes this week so much better. Thank you so very much. Pity that parents are fabulous at interrupting what should be a very productive and relaxing time.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"So no in-laws to worry about then; good\"
Hermione\'s a thinking girl, that\'s for sure.
Gorgeous chapter - I liked Ron\'s reaction, and Harry\'s. And I love the rationalization you had her use for not choosing a Weasley (i.e. losing their jobs because of her future political rallies, etc). Great idea and I don\'t need to tell you how original it is in this challenge...
*smooches*
Hermione\'s a thinking girl, that\'s for sure.
Gorgeous chapter - I liked Ron\'s reaction, and Harry\'s. And I love the rationalization you had her use for not choosing a Weasley (i.e. losing their jobs because of her future political rallies, etc). Great idea and I don\'t need to tell you how original it is in this challenge...
*smooches*
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear....
Professor Snape...
As if we couldn\'t see that coming......
As always I enjoyed a good giggle. I like this plot, no shrinking violet Hermione here... Though I do hope she finds a few \'other\' uses to put her petke tke to. :)
Love Jeanette
Professor Snape...
As if we couldn\'t see that coming......
As always I enjoyed a good giggle. I like this plot, no shrinking violet Hermione here... Though I do hope she finds a few \'other\' uses to put her petke tke to. :)
Love Jeanette
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love your un-wussy Hermione. Not sure if unwussy is a word but I am using it anyway. I love stories where she takes charge. Somehow that seems so much more in character than her being a whipped puppy. I am anxious to read about Snapes reaction to his impending nuptials. Bet he takes it well. LOL. Thanks again for another of your fantastic stories.