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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nobly dissembling!Hermione? Gracious!Ron? And I LIKED these unexpected characterizations?? Must be another Shiv installment. *happy sigh*
I snorted (to my children\'s amusement) at Severus\'s thought that marriage with Hermione would likely involve a great deal of arguing. It is my fervent hope it involves a great deal more making up and that you, my dear author, let us see that -- sooner, rather than later, if you please. *looks earnest and pleading*
I snorted (to my children\'s amusement) at Severus\'s thought that marriage with Hermione would likely involve a great deal of arguing. It is my fervent hope it involves a great deal more making up and that you, my dear author, let us see that -- sooner, rather than later, if you please. *looks earnest and pleading*
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee! Such a wonderful chapter. The Hermione/Snape interaction was just...well, perfect for lack of a better word. I could totally see both of their characters saying and acting exactly as you wrote they would. And the Hermione/Ron bit? ~~
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow!! What a great read! I\'ve put off reading A Law to Herself because it\'s a WIP but now I\'m very glad that I went ahead and read up through your latest update. Great characterizations, a truly original response to the Marriage Law thread, and so funny in spots that I find myself still laughing. Thanks for sharing!
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is reallt growing please update soon! more! more! more!
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice interaction between Hermione and Snape. As always I enjoyr wrr writing. I await the Wedding and the ..............Wedding Night!?! What has Snape gotten himself into?
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Three Cheers (at least) for your feisty, clever Hermione! It\'s a wonderful balm upon my recently injured mind.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are such a talented writer. the level of wit, intelligence and creativity in the stories i\'ve read are amazing. you show this so easily too. hermione\'s chat with snape, showed how smart hermione is by thinking everything through so thoroughly. and that only shows how mucu hau have thought this through. they way you turn a phrase, the way you describe the thoughts and actions of the characters really has them in character (by canon standards of course) and makes me extremely jealous. i only wish i had that gift. i can\'t wait for more.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the \'proposal\' scene, I found it very amusing, and it was very well written.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... FABULOUS chapter!!! I really like the way you wrote the conversation (both inner & joint) between Hermione & Ron!!!
He didn\'t really have much reason to put up a fight, she had very well thought out reasons!!! I don\'t think that she expected him to agree so soon:
He didn\'t really have much reason to put up a fight, she had very well thought out reasons!!! I don\'t think that she expected him to agree so soon:
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Hermione! Wow she is definitely a force to be reckoned with.