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Love the update, definitely looking forward to more!

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you should update this soon as I love this styory and can\'t wait for the next chapter. I just hope that after this fantastic start you won\'t make Severus and Hermione all goody goody romantic. I hate when that happens and unfortunately most who answer to the challenge do just that. They have good starts and then they write something complety annoying and the whole story is so goody goody stuff. I just hope that your story won\'t end up like that. Some romance yes but not all...I like some angst too. Then again why am I giving you advices? It\'s your story to do as you please.

*claps enthusiastically* Brilliant chapter. I loved the snape/Hermione conversation... your hermione is so perfect I love her. WMS

I actually came to this site to see if my review on the \'other story\' had been deleted and found the whole story gone! Yeah, Shiv rules! I really do like the story and the original take. Keep up the good work.

Ah, the full-blown banter of Shiv\'s Hermione and Snape.....is there anything saucier? I think not. I love this; can\'t wait to see further interactions between these two knuckleheads.
Helen

Funny and brilliant and sweet. Please continue? This is your best story, IMHO.

My you are prolific(sp) - interesting idea. I like it when Ron at least tries to marry her it makes more sense to me. Thanks.

Brilliant! Fan-bloody-tastic! I love your take on the marriage law challenge. So far it\'s absolutwondwonderful.

I love how this fic is progressing. The proposal seemed very in character for the both of them.