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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww. That last line was SO adorable. :D this story rules. Please update sooon.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how you\'ve written Hermione...You would think more fanfic writers would portray her actually useing her brains!
I loved what you said about having Hene mne marry Lucius and ruling the magical world....Please do another story (after you finish this one!) With H/L and the marriage law, make her a Mary Sue, make her a strong witch (her friends and teachers know, but L does not) Have her able to make her own wand, don\'t make her a scared virgin.....This is my wish!!
Oh well, I like how a lawgoingoing keep up thod wod work.
I loved what you said about having Hene mne marry Lucius and ruling the magical world....Please do another story (after you finish this one!) With H/L and the marriage law, make her a Mary Sue, make her a strong witch (her friends and teachers know, but L does not) Have her able to make her own wand, don\'t make her a scared virgin.....This is my wish!!
Oh well, I like how a lawgoingoing keep up thod wod work.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Passibley attractive. Funny. Great chapter. Thanks.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, am behind on reading. This is for 5 and 6. Contingency!Hermione pleases me very much--her ability in this story to figure out what they are and how to maneuver them, characters as well as facts. Then there\'s the moment in 6 where we switch from (Professor) Snape to Severus enjoying himself in conversation and back to Professor Snape assessed as authority figure. Nicely done. And 6\'s end is nicely fuzzy without losing accumulated edge.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update...well ut took long enough. Please update sooner this time...please
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... I LOVE how they got over on Albus!!! I don\'t know that he could have been any more annoyed, but in the end I\'m sure that he had to feel a bit relieved that he wouldn\'t be the one that had to bother with Lucius OR Hermione!!!
I really do like how you are working things out between Severus & Hermione!!! I do so hope that eventually they will come to realize that they are wanting to be more than just friends!!!
I am looking forward to seeing how the visit with her parents goes!!! Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
I really do like how you are working things out between Severus & Hermione!!! I do so hope that eventually they will come to realize that they are wanting to be more than just friends!!!
I am looking forward to seeing how the visit with her parents goes!!! Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how they we\'re going to get ad Dud Dumbledore. They managed that beautifully. Wonderfully chapter.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how they we\'re going to get around Dumbledore. They managed that beautifully. Wonderfully chapter.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your political shenanigans with Albus, and the clear understanding Hermione and Snape have almost immediately when they have to deal with AD. Very lovelyinniinning of another great HG/SS. Thanks so much
Helen
Helen