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for A law to herself

by Shiv5468

person Shellnet
schedule November 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Why did you Abandon this

schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely the most hilarious and true to character take on Marriage Law I have ever read. Good times. It's not often that I laugh out loud in the middle of a story, but I've done it with this one so often I actually had to stop, review and now get back into it. Well done, you.
person wudelfin
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
k where the hell is the rest of it!!!!
person jean
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. When will we get more of it?
person Rosebery
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your stories, you are such a brilliant author. Please, update this story soon, I have to know how it ends.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Shaughnessy
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this was a really good story. It was well written and had me laughing throughout. It kept my interest and has me on the edge of my seat, waiting for more. I only have one suggestion and that is to have it edited. There were a few mistakes, but thats entirely normal. I hope that you keep going with this story and I intend to check back for updates. Good job.
person Lynn
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found your stroy rather delightful. I love the way you developed the 2 charries. DO continue, i am dying to see what is going to happen next. (:
person Lrnd
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hihi!! I love this story!! It's just so much fun
person Heather
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The plot seems to be there. But I would highly recommand a beta or atleast spell check. It makes it really hard to read your work.