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for Dark Gods in the Brain Cavity

by Hayseed

person Midnight Tiger
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! thats great! im glad that you can joke about your own work likat. at. i have trouble with it because i criticise my own writting far to much as it is. :) thanks again for a grat laugh and a great story.
person Mindyme
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Me Oh My! I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes.... and I\'m still smiling! :)
Thanks for \"Brain Cavity\"!

Mindyme
person Bambu
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very funny. I have had two ideas, being the avid sort of mystery reader that I am, however, I know better than to make assumptions. I will be very happy to read a chapter a day... until the end. Sigh. Severus did seem fairly polite, didn\'t he? I think his time spent at Perkins wasn\'t a waste.
person Angel
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! That was funny and made me smile. I think that you are not only brave for writting a story that is fun to read but also puts a different twist on the original fiction. This story made me smile(that is hard to do now) and I enjoyed it :) I can\'t wait to read the rest of the other fiction. I look the fact the that you post a chapter a day. That is a nice change from other authors whom are stilling writting the story that they are posting. Thanks again for both stories.
person jenn
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*lol* oh lord, that was amusing. very well done, and as someone who has been following your main fic i have one theory - i think snape has been in and out of the asylum long before he ever noticed he could actually do it. if he\'s been a spy for as long as he has been, i wouldn\'t be surprised if he\'s split somehow. but that\'s simply my theory... :) your fic is incredible, as is your parody. though i must admit... i honestly thought that the person you were initially describing was pat from snl until i realized, wait, no curly hair. i\'m sure you\'re not called \"sir\" too often. not unless you just intimidate all the boys with your incredible brilliance. :)
person Favrielle
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. Nice twist on the end of that last chapter. It is frustrating when you are writing something, but aren\'t one hundred percent sure who actually did it. Great.
person Subtilior
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bwah ha ha!!! You are the greatest!!! I love the mock of \"Decoding of the Heart\" that you did, too, BTW. Oh - and why not just threaten Severus with a hot spot of necrophilia while you\'re at it? :) :)

On a more serious note, I think it\'s really great that you\'re able to step back from your work enough to parody it. I\'m getting so wrapped up in the story that I find 24 hours almost too long to wait ... I want to scrub the cobwebs from Snape\'s mind, get him his magic back ... so Dumbledore has his wand, right? Took it when he CAST the F-IN\' charm to TAKE HIS MAGIC AWAY, RIGHT??!!! *growls*

Geez - I need to save my rants for the actual fic itself, not the parody. :) Suffice to say, I don\'t like your Dumbledore - and in this version, I\'m happy that he ends up with Francoise. They can dish out hemlock-laced lemon drops to all and sundry.

Oh, and if you\'re still open to suggestion ... may I suggest \"Dark Godz in da Hood\" fhe she sequel?
person Subtilior
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PS - Oh, fuck fuck fuck. I\'m not a racist. I\'m not a racist!! I was just trying to make a joke with the title!!

*sulks* Lousy excessively PC upbringing!

Oh - and can I ask you something I almost forgot about? Why does Francoise dislike lobster? Something about cracking those tough shells open with a pair of pliers?

person Subtilior
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Last time, I promise!!

Snape: Shit - mofos kickin\' it in their cribs, they get whacked by some crazy muthafucka, and this is still on the downlow? Dat is wack, yo.

Hermione: Word!

:)
person SeverelySnaped
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay---that was just freakin\' hilarious. I have been keeping up with Dark Gods since day one, and today\'s chapter was just awesome. But this---this lil\' Faux Fic-let (well, chapter, to be exact---it isn\'t long enough to be considered a fic-let---but that\'s just ME rambling so I will shut the hell up) was the icing on the cake. I LOVE IT!! Keep up the good job, chica!!

S.S.