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for Carnal Desires

by DracoTFelt1277

person illnevertellyou
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You have got to write more on that I am dying to know what that conversation will be about!!!!
Great job so far but you need to post more ASAP!!!
~ Jaimie ~
person Kinky Girl
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The anticipation is killing me!
I know it
person LilyMarielle
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely fantastic, please add more soon!! And if you can please read my story, it\'s called the Hidden Threads of Fate
person Draco_Fan
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH yes! this sounds too good! update soon! what does draco got in mind?!?!?!
person chillkat
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, but i want more
person Serpentina
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a very promising start. I\'d like to read more of it.
person Debbie
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please capitalize I when you use first person singular and please run your story through spell check. It is really short enough that you should be able to catch the misspelled words. Nice idea though.
person Apollonia
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome intro! Does Hermione share an attraction to Draco? I would either seem like it or she has no idea that he feels lust for her. (I hope that it\'s the latter; that way it would be a complete surprise that she sees he\'s attracted to her.) Please update soon!