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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a very talented writer. Nice! I might have to stop reading this, though. It's absolutely no fun at all not knowing who one of the main characters are.
You waited too long. First chapter a mystery, all right. But people lose interest if you don't tell them by the 2nd or 3rd chapter.
You waited too long. First chapter a mystery, all right. But people lose interest if you don't tell them by the 2nd or 3rd chapter.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you gonna let us know who the girl is? its so much better if we can picture the other person
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, the girl is taking back some power. I like that, I was hoping that she would make the best of a terrible situation, and find her power within. Although you have me perplexed about the character, a thing I usually find annoying, I am enjoying formulating theories.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could easily be wrong, but there\'s no way Lucius would buy Hermione for Draco, so she\'s out. Ginny is a possibility, but they already don\'t have much money and she does have all those protective older brothers who hate the Malfoys, so I think she\'s out too. I\'m intrigued that she is waiting for him in the dungeons, but that her parents were killed by Death Eaters. Nope, no guess.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man you gotta to finish this and name the girl. This is so cool, typical malfoy already gotten blowjob and now fucked her in the arse....
It also well written, and it flows good, not jumble like a lot of storys are. cant wait for the next chapter....
It also well written, and it flows good, not jumble like a lot of storys are. cant wait for the next chapter....
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update! I love it it
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I most know!!!!! Pleas do the reast!!!!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not gonna say yet who it is. I find it interesting to read what others are guessing, what they want.. the whole time already knowing. a new chapter shall be up soon. Sadly, i got stuck on this new story i wrote called \"lower then up\" read it and review, please, its great! it\'s almost completely up for i have finsihed writing it all, just gotta type it up. now that i am finsihed writing it, i am going to write another chapter here and will have it posted very shortly, promise! thank you everyone for reading and reviewing!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Scary! I\'m such a wimp. Tell me, is it Ginny?
It\'s terrific that you\'ve left us guessing.
It\'s terrific that you\'ve left us guessing.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent story so far!!
My guess is that its Ginny - her family is poor, and with Hermione\'s parents being dentists, they would be well off... Plus, Lucius would never allow his son to marry a mudblood... Giving the Weasley\'s money for Ginny would be humiliating for them, and he hates them enough for that...
So, yes, my guess is that its Ginny - but you have to tell us soon!! Right after a little more lovely torture - Draco is so hot in this!!
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Well done...
My guess is that its Ginny - her family is poor, and with Hermione\'s parents being dentists, they would be well off... Plus, Lucius would never allow his son to marry a mudblood... Giving the Weasley\'s money for Ginny would be humiliating for them, and he hates them enough for that...
So, yes, my guess is that its Ginny - but you have to tell us soon!! Right after a little more lovely torture - Draco is so hot in this!!
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Well done...