rate_review Reviews

Awww how sweet! And I like that there are paragraphs! Thanks

interesting turn of events post again soon

Great continuation of the story. My only thing is that I would like breaks in the paragraphs. Makes it much easier to read. I can not wait for the next part!

This has promise and is an interesting set up, but you really need to take a look at the formatting. Did you write it in big big paragraph or was there a formatting problem when you uploaded it to the site? In either case, there is far too much information for one paragraph. It\'s really hard to read, but in spite of that, I\'m curious to find out what happens next, but I still hope you\'ll edit the first chapter as well.

Good start.