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I don't review chapters or stories, but this one touched me so deeply I couldn't help but want to postpone my awe to you. I weeped through many chapters and the agony in my heart still lingers on.
Simply beautiful.
I read your other story as well, and might add here that it too was most touching and unique... I can only wish that you write something more for us to enjoy.

With best regards;
Zixra

Jenny, Jenny, Jenny.......come on!!! Please give us the ending. This is torture. There can't be much more left. Please Please...I'm not above begging, pleading, going down on my knees and groveling. Tell me what you want me to do and I'll do it!!!! Take care of your kids, go to work for you, run the PTO. Whatever the real life problem, I'm ready to lend a hand just to hear the end of the story. I know you have it, so give it to us. Even if it's a little rough. We'll help you polish it.......seriously. You know I love this story. I've been with it since the beginning. Come on, throw me a bone!!!! Love ya gal. Come back to us.

Yeah, you're back. Great chapter. Snape is a total asshole right to the very end!!!! I love it. Ohhh, how will Gerry reign him in?? I can't wait to see the end. I agree with a previous reviewer: Why aren't more people reading this??? (Or does this have to do with the new AFF format? Did you lose some reviews? Also, I don't really see how I can log in, but maybe I'm automatically logged in??) Keep up the great work....and UPDATE THE LAST CHAPTER SOON!!!!

Jenny -- I\'ve been reading this story since May of 2004 and it just gets better. To bad more people aren\'t appreciating it. Can\'t believe there are only 13 reviews. Thank you for persistently continuing to write it.

Hey there!!! I\'m missing you and this story. If you\'re busy, I understand. But if you\'re in a slump, please let me encourage you!! This is a great story. I know you have vision, direction and purpose for this storyline. Don\'t be discouraged. Keep going. We all love this story and you know we\'ll help you in whatever way we can. Keep writing, \'cause I keep reading!! Good Luck.

GREAT!! If you have a notification list, please put me on it. I\'m enjoying this story so much. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Oh my I love the way Snape doesn\'t want to surrender, but he can\'t help it. And Gerry is also so unsure, but willing to force the issue and not let him push her away. Perfect.

Great story....can\'t wait to read what happens next. Please, please update soon. I like this weakened Snape. He\'s still snarky, but it\'s a refreshing change from the \'super-human\' Snape who is more often in stories. Kudos!

I love this story. Keep Severus snarky like you\'ve done already. I am aching to see (read) them together. The tension is great. Good idea about this \"Potion\". Plot is very intriguing. Please keep updating and continue with this wonderfully interesting story.

Jenny,
This was very nicely done. Snape's situation at the beginning of the chapter brought tears to my eyes.
Marianne

Jenny Jar,
I have to say, this is my current, top of the charts, favorite fanfic. I'm not sure why, but I love it. This is why I am offering to beta for you. The problems you have with grammar, word usage, and punctuation, are detracting from a fine story. And they are so easily fixed. If you are interested, I've included my email.

The current twist and complication is really nice, by the way. I never even considered that she was making an unauthorized redux, and wouave ave to pay the fines. I would love to see these two redeemed. They so deserve it.

Marianne (severuscarus, OddDoll)