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good smut as long as you like draco/hermione. now I do expect to see a H/Hr scene in here as well.

Very good so far! Some fics make me want to cry out in pain for all of the sp errors and grammar stuff. Since Draco and Hermione are my two favorite couples in the world, I was being rather picky with some stuff. But I can\'t really get mad at you for anything! except for the fact that there isn\'t another chapter >:-o. ^^ i <3 you!!

Damn that was a sexy chapter! Draco wants what he wants and he\'s going to get it any way he can and he doesn\'t care what anyone thinks! Typical Slytherin. Lucius probably wouldn\'t care if he bedded a mudblood. Men like him think women like Hermione are only good for sex anyway. Besides, getting to Hermione would be a sure and cunning way to get to Harry. Get the girl to get the boy. Harry would be extremely upset, though. Does Severus know something about Harry Draco doesn\'t know, yet? Dun, dun, DUN! Anywho, very delicious chapter, just like the one before. Please continue!

this was really well written, although i\'m a slash shipper through and through. i was forced to read this on a dare cause she said it was fantasic.. and i agree, it was good. great job.

I really liked this story because if the interaction being draco,harry, and hermione. Although I wish that hermione didn\'t lose her virginity to draco, it\'s your story. You should totally keep writing this story. I\'ve been waiting for chapter 6 forever and can\'t wait for the updates!

Very nice. It\'s perfect so far. The love scene was indeed vertilltillating! My only request is: Don\'t let Hermione have sex with any other guy but Draco. It would ruin my lurve for this story.
Draco is for Hermione. Hermione is for Draco.

uh oh , man I cant wait to see what happens next :)

Incredible love scene. Hehe. Not bad for your first time. :) I\'ve been following this story for some time now and I\'m glad that you\'ve finally updated. Let\'s hope that Snape keeps this secret between the three of them. I don\'t see any point in him telling Harry about Draco and Hermione\'s little tryst.

HURRI N UPDATE !!! THIS FIC IS REALLY GOOD!!

Seems as if you\'re off to a good start to me. The feelings Harry and Hermione seem to have for each other seem to be a bit much at times, though. It feels a little too melodramatic. I think Hermione\'s a bit too practical to think that one summer of fun equals love everlasting. And the Harry I\'ve become accustomed to isn\'t so aggressive towards the opposite sex. He\'s a little more reserved and unsure of himself when on romantic ground; you might even call him shy. I think it would be more believable if they both THOUGHT they were falling in love with each other after spending a wonderful summer together.

I do like the way you\'re handling Malfoy and Hermione\'s interactions, though. Those feel right on target on to me. And you\'ve got Snape, Ron and Dumbledore characterized perfectly . . . So, keep up the good work, and I\'m sure your fic will only get better as it goes along.