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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh silly me
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far, you\'ve done really well with the Draco/Hermione developement. I feel so sorry for Harry though. Please tell me you don\'t torture him too much. Well written, hope you update soon! =)
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to read all nine chapters, i started reading this a while back, and to be honost I forgot about it, til I saw it back up on the list of stories, So I say YEA!!!!!!! Another chapter. Can\'t wait to read how Harry finds out about the two of them. I\'m sure it will be great.
jeannette
jeannette
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome! Email me when u update please! (just make sure you tell me where i can find ur story! or ill forget!)
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story is coming along great. I cant wait until the next chapter :)
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... very good, very good! Brilliant story so far - an accurate portrayal of the characters. Even though I'm all for the Granger-Malfoy thing, I appreciate the fairness in which Harry is written: lots of HG/DM fics have Harry portrayed as a whimpering, impotent loser. Come to think of it, I don't even know if this fic IS HG/DM or HG/HP - suspenseful (is that a word? Did I spell it correctly?:), which I also appreciate. Anyhow, I hope it's HG/DM and I really, really hope you continue updating so that I can find out. cheers.
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I can't wait to read future chapters.
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really cool fic.But I noticed that you have a few spelling mistakes.One in particular that you often use is the word sight,which you keep spelling as site. Ex:"don't let her out of your site."
There a few more in the earlier chapters.Maybe you should reread your fic or use a word checker.Typos are common but can be confusing to the readers.
But overall,this fic is fantastic.Can't wait for more HOT stuff!Keep it up!
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I can't feel sorry for Harry because I love the Draco/Hermione pair. Interesting story line though, keep it up.
~Ruth
~Ruth