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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t normally like Snape going fluffy, but you write so wonderfully that I totally believed it. Please write more!
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the end of chapter 2 I laughed so hard my sides hurt and my eyes began to water. Thank you for taking the time to write and share this fic PLZ do keep up the good work. \"Who the hell needs a plan when I have Albus-fucking-Dumbledoor!\" LOL Thats great (wipes tears of mirth from eyes)Happy Holidays [signed] Loki
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was the best 2 part story I have ever read. I love it and hope to see more soon..
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story. GReat sex scenes too.
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story!!!! ;)
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yea nesscafe! WRITE ON WRITE ON!!!!! lol i love ur story and OMG we are both ness..kinda..nesa ness same difference.
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been liking the story so far. Good writing. Nice style. One thing though--"How's your father?" I don't get that. Sill me I thought the saying was, "Who's your Daddy?" Think about it. It makes more sense.
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd just like to say that I absolutely adore this story. Not in a fanatical fan-girl sort of way though.
Ok... so I lied. I do.
I really really do.
And the title is positively alluring. I giggled when I saw it.
I can't help but notice that the addictive potions master is more than a little out of character. Normally thisetssets me, considering him being a bastard is such a turn on. However, the thought of him being enslaved by a possessive 'Mione is enough to make up for the lack of the uber-awesome snarkiness that is Professor Snape.
Speaking of a possessive Hermione, have I mentioned I love thea? ea? Because boy do I ever. There's something about her know-it-all, sarcastic personality in class that just screams, "Fuck me now or you'll pay."
And she's made it clear he'll pay all right.
I've always thought of Snape as someone who thinks no one could ever love him, but when they do he refuses to give it up because well... he's pretty damn possessive. If it's his, there's no way he's ever going to lose it. And if he does then the other persons going to hurt.
And not just in a kick-in-the-balls way.
More of a stay-away-or-you'll-learn-that-I-don't-play-fair-and-there-are-things-that-hurt-more-than-Crucio's way.
Oh, and by the way, if you happen to re-read your stories (Like I do) then I wonder if you've noticed the overwhelming amount of exclamation marks. There really are alot. One thing I love about Snape (And I'm sure the feeling's mutual) is that he can stay calm, cool, and collected, even when faced with the most dire situations. But in your story he seems to ess mss many things in a very passionate way. Not that that's bad of course. It's just that... well... actually I don't know what I'm getting at.
There are just a lot of exclamation marks.
Petty and meaningless observations aside, I love your story, and the one preceding it. I hope you continue with this because reading it makes me happy. Oh so very happy.
Oh, and you know how Snape
Ok... so I lied. I do.
I really really do.
And the title is positively alluring. I giggled when I saw it.
I can't help but notice that the addictive potions master is more than a little out of character. Normally thisetssets me, considering him being a bastard is such a turn on. However, the thought of him being enslaved by a possessive 'Mione is enough to make up for the lack of the uber-awesome snarkiness that is Professor Snape.
Speaking of a possessive Hermione, have I mentioned I love thea? ea? Because boy do I ever. There's something about her know-it-all, sarcastic personality in class that just screams, "Fuck me now or you'll pay."
And she's made it clear he'll pay all right.
I've always thought of Snape as someone who thinks no one could ever love him, but when they do he refuses to give it up because well... he's pretty damn possessive. If it's his, there's no way he's ever going to lose it. And if he does then the other persons going to hurt.
And not just in a kick-in-the-balls way.
More of a stay-away-or-you'll-learn-that-I-don't-play-fair-and-there-are-things-that-hurt-more-than-Crucio's way.
Oh, and by the way, if you happen to re-read your stories (Like I do) then I wonder if you've noticed the overwhelming amount of exclamation marks. There really are alot. One thing I love about Snape (And I'm sure the feeling's mutual) is that he can stay calm, cool, and collected, even when faced with the most dire situations. But in your story he seems to ess mss many things in a very passionate way. Not that that's bad of course. It's just that... well... actually I don't know what I'm getting at.
There are just a lot of exclamation marks.
Petty and meaningless observations aside, I love your story, and the one preceding it. I hope you continue with this because reading it makes me happy. Oh so very happy.
Oh, and you know how Snape
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! thanks you SO much!!!!