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for A Crown of Thorns

by taryn

person amsev
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAGGGHHH! Evil cliffie! Evil! Happy computer shopping.... Oh, please update soon!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11... HOLY CRAP!!! Poor Severus!!! I can only imagine how badly Hermione must be feeling after what she did to him!!! I know that she had no clue who it was, after those dreams she\'s been having this really must bother her!!!

I can\'t wait to see what happens next?!? What will she do & what will happen to them?!? Will the Order be able to find them in time?!? I will be looking forward to your next update when you are able to post it!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
person FireBlade
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I hope Severus isn\'t dead, Ill kill Riddle and Malfoy and whoever else might have totured him! Awesome chapter. Love it.
FireBlade
person ancientgirl
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well shit! I had a feeling something like this was going to happen. How is Hermione going to get him out of this I wonder. Please give your computer some TLC and update soon, you can\'t leave us hangning like this for too long, PLLLLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!
person Burnt-Parchment
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH I LOVE THIS STORY VERY NICE INDEED!!!...POOR SNAPE.....Oh well....love the story keep it up, I know how it feels like to have a suicidal computer, your lucky mine lets me type the work but just after I type the last word it decides to jump...*sigh*...well anyway love it!
person ArienAstera
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Severus... its too bad you wont be updating as fast. I quite enjoy the frequent chapters. Ah well, I understand your computer . I . I just got a brand new one for my birthday and its so much better than the old one :)
ArienAstera
person ArienAstera
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I missed ch9 (my sister came to visit) so this is a double review.

Both chapters are good (as always) and I think that you end them well. you write enough of a cliffy to make people want more but not enough to piss them off. sometimes that can be hard to do.

So I\'m wonder what the Order are going to try to do to help him. I wonder what they think they can do. I wonder... many things, but I\'ll let you tell it in your own time. (Like i have a choice anyway lol)

ArienAstera
person SnapeyBears
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know why, but in the last chapter when Hermione came towards \'Lucius\' and Voldeymort (I know I have a \'Y\' in there) I got an image of Claudia from Interview With the Vampire...I love the story, I almost wasn\'t going to read it, but I am glad that I did. Please update regularly :)
person FireBlade
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Crappy Crap Crap, Snape\'s in BIG trouble now, and one more thing if Snape used the Ployjuice potion wouldn\'t it have worn off by then? Love it ja ne!
person FireBlade
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is just getting better and better, sorta Love it tho keep going ja ne!