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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The part where it says something about \'the hair falling across his bare shoulder\', the first thing that came to my mind (and don\'t ask why, I don\'t know) was \"Eww!! He has hairy shoulders!\" I laughed because I\'m so stupid, but then I looked again and thought \"Oh, well that makes sense\" I can\'t wait to see what she\'s going to do on the trip.
ArienAstera
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14... I had sort of hoped that Hermione would take the opportunity to let Severus know at least a hint about what she has been dreaming!!! The kiss before she left may have been a bit of a clue, not to mention that she is refusing to just leave & not come back for him!!!
It looks like things are about to get even more INTERESTING!!! I can\'t wait to see what Hermione does to Lucius while they are out!!! I hope she takes Severus\' advice & gets rid of Lucius!!!
Can\'t wait to see whaere you take this next!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^<
It looks like things are about to get even more INTERESTING!!! I can\'t wait to see what Hermione does to Lucius while they are out!!! I hope she takes Severus\' advice & gets rid of Lucius!!!
Can\'t wait to see whaere you take this next!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^<
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hwy great story. keep up this wonderful story. im truly enjoying it.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters but would it sound too ungrateful of me to say they were too short? I\'m glad Hermione was able to save Severus, but I would love to see more of them together, and I\'m sure you will provide us with more. I also like the combo of Draco/Ginny, I love this combination.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha!! I love it. Deep down, Voldemort is just a big, fat, stuttering, weeny. I love that she can do that to him. And now there seems to be another spy *HOORAY* But, I might need to remind you that Ginny is a not a mudblood, she\'s a pureblood. So it would be perfectly alright (technically) if they were to marry. I read a dient ent review (don\'t remember who it was) that said the chapters could be longer and I absolutely agree. Not that short is bad but I just want more of everything!! ;) So until the next update...
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!! Awesome!!!! I love this chapter/story. Voldey is soooooooooooo wrapped around Hermione\'s finger she could probably with some convincing get him to get rid of malfoy if she made HIM look like he betrayed Riddle, love it
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww cute, G and D are togetther! cant wait to see whats up, I love it
FireBlade
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story....I have read so many Hermione gets kidnapped by he who must not be named and was getting kind of bored with them....your story is very interesting and I anxiously wait for the next part.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
superb, this story is simply wonderful!!!!!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 12 & 13... l pll playing catch up & am really beginning to wonder if one can ever get caught up!?! 2 more GREAT chapters!!! I really like how Hermione covered Severus\' (_!_) while making Lucius look the fool!!! I am looking forward to seeing how they work together & finding out if they will begin a relationship beyond friendship!!!
I am happy to see that Draco & Ginny are together & that Draco is helping the Order!!! I am curious to see what Albus will do about the information that Draco has as well as hoping that he will put a good word in with Arthur & Molly about the relationship!!!
Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<
I am happy to see that Draco & Ginny are together & that Draco is helping the Order!!! I am curious to see what Albus will do about the information that Draco has as well as hoping that he will put a good word in with Arthur & Molly about the relationship!!!
Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<