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for A Crown of Thorns

by taryn

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... Oh how I LOVE to HATE Lucius Malfoy!!! It seems that his lot in life is to be a pain in the (_!_) of Severus Snape!!! I do hope that when all is said & done he will feel the wrath of Severus & Hermione!!!

What is Severus going to do now that Lucius knows of his watching him?!? Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
person FireBlade
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Sev, Well i sure hope that he isnt that insignifinct to everyone. I love it thus far, ja ne!
person ArienAstera
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dammit!! I know what basically going to happen and I am still dreading it. I dont know how you plan on doing it but I cant wait to find out! So please update fast!!
person ArienAstera
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. I cant wait to see where you take it. T you you for giving this a try. That was the first challenge I\'ve posted and to be honest I\'m a litle surprised that people are doing it. Cant wait for an update!!
person Laurie
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Starting out good, keep writing.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1 - 4... You have the beginnings of another FABULOUS story here!!! I like the way that you are writing Hermione, not changing sides, but using this to her advantage!!!

Glad to see that Severus is finally in the picture!!! I am curious to see what it is that causes Severus to be discovered to be a traitor?!? Can\'t wait to find out!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
person ArienAstera
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im really liking this so far. I wonder what Hermione\'s thoughts are about becoming his heir? Maybe you could put something like that in there. GOOD JOB!!
person FireBlade
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, poor Hermione tho well sorta shes really confused. I love it tho Awesome plot cant wait for more ja ne!
person FireBlade
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning, besides the fact that Hermione was just taken to the \'Dark Lord\' I love it i cant wait to see whats up next ja ne!