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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t remember if I reviewed you on L&LS but I really enjoy your story and I\'m looking forward to a new chapter soon. Keep up the good work.
Da Feather
Da Feather
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was great. You did a wonderful job with both their thoughts. The difference between Severus and the other men she has had relationships with is Severus doesn\'t care about hhe lhe looks, because he is interested in what\'s inside. Not to mention he is the only one who could ever understand what she really went through, not just because he saw it in her mind, but because he was part of \"the war\" like she was. I\'m looking forward to your next chapter. This is becoming such a beautifully romantic story.
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10... What a FABULOUS chapter!!! 1st thing that I want to say is that I really like how you are bringing so much emotion into this story!!! To read the inner thoughts that they have about their lives & each other is vivd & at times very sad!!! They both have negative thoughts as to why the other would want them, but I feel that they are what will make the other whole!!! I am so glad that they both made the choice to make the effort & am looking forward to watching their relationship grow & change!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is brilliant! I hope to see more come, you write beautifully.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9... I am very much enjoying the progress of their relationship!!! I LOVE the way that they are both wanting the same thing, but still nervous about how what they say is taken by the other!!!
They have so very much in common, including a deep sense of respect for each other & I look forward to seeing them go beyond their kisses & take the next steps of their relationship!!! I am also looking forward to seeing if Severus can find the book that can release Hermione from the curse!!! Can\'t wait for chapter 10!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
They have so very much in common, including a deep sense of respect for each other & I look forward to seeing them go beyond their kisses & take the next steps of their relationship!!! I am also looking forward to seeing if Severus can find the book that can release Hermione from the curse!!! Can\'t wait for chapter 10!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Really really good story!! I can\'t wait until the next chapter. Please don\'t keep me waiting.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nad aad at all! I\'m rather enjoying this fic - it\'s quite unique, and the curse on Hermione was definitely unexpected. What I don\'t get, is why is Hermione actually teaching Snape HTML? There are so many programs, like DreamWeaver, out there that let you design websites w/o actually having to know the code. But, I guess it\'s a necessary portion of the plot, so I wouldn\'t have it any other way! Good luck writing and I look forward to many future chapters!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8... This chapter is so filled with powerful emotions, pain, hurt, comfort & hope!!! You did an AMAZING job of writing this!!! I am sitting here with tears in my eyes, sad for what happened to her, sad that Severus hurts for what she did for him & yet happy because they are comforting each other & he holds the hope that he may be able to help her end the curse!!!
I am very much looking forward to your next update as I can\'t wait to see if Severus can find the counter-curse!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<
I am very much looking forward to your next update as I can\'t wait to see if Severus can find the counter-curse!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! No wonder she has nightmares! Bloody hell! Wonderfully written chapts als always. Keep up the good work!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like I said before this is
very good. I am enjoying it
Please keep writing.
Vicki
very good. I am enjoying it
Please keep writing.
Vicki