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for Hogwarts Online

by jonelin

person ancientgirl
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. I hope this is really the counter curse and that she can be cured finally. Please update soon!!!!
person jenocclumency
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I enjoyed watching Snape find the hidden dungeon.
And I\'m so relieved that he found the counter-curse so easily!
person devsgma
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, cheese all you want. I really liked it a lo Hav Have you made your own plans to take over the world yet or still waiting on mine? Glad to see you\'ve updatedill ill probably leave you one at L&LS, too.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12... I am so glad that she finally asked him about where the relationship was going after!!! They are so good for each other!!!

I am also glad that he will be able to look for the books!!! I do hope that he will be able to find a way to help her!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<
person devsgma
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When I saw this up at the top my heart started racing - a new chapter? But I\'m not angry - it gave me the chance to read it all again - I\'m so glad I did. I had forgotten parts of the story and it was like reading it anew. I hope they find that blasted book soon.
person hcbroncochick (Amanda)
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo good!! I\'m glad they finally got to be with one another. Can\'t wait till you update next.
person jenocclumency
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You write amazing sex scenes! I wish I could write sex scenes even half that well!
I can\'t wait to see what\'s next!
person ancientgirl
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, I\'m all goose fleshy now. Great chapter! I\'m so glad he made her feel so good about herself after her being so worried about the way her body looks. But we know Severus isn\'t all about beauty. Please update soon.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11... AMAZING!!! This is BEAUTIFUL!!! The way you wrote them sharing each other was so very PERFECT!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
person shaz
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story- just love the mental; imaf snf snskipskipping down a flight of stairs...practically:P

hugs shaz