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for Be Mine

by Muzicgurl76

person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Annie
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story sucks... sorry, but it does...
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story really sucks.....grow up before you right anymore....how old are you anyway?
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice try, but this is horrid. If you listen to what that one reviewer was telling you, he or she doesn't know whhe hhe hell they're talking about either. Please work on the formatting, grammar and spelling in this story. It's horrid and juvenile due to the way it's set up now--it gives the reader the impression that you are sloppy and lazy; completely un-professional.
person Nicole
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Dark Angel
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You re hat hate writing, don't you? All those &'s is slowly making me go mad...
person Dark Angel
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just so you know.. You don't 'go' lesbian. That's so weard of you to even think. If someone is with both girls and boys shes bi. (Although I belive that everyone is Bi from the beginning, and just choses his or her preferences after who they fall in love with first... But that just my teori...)
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool