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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Very nice, considering the fic's unbeta'ed and AU to the boot. My only problem is that the story is so slow. It's ok for the POV to shift, but to return to the same scene from a different POV? I was kind of tired of reading how beautiful and angelic and classy and desirable both Harry and Draco are (I already know! ^_~), but maybe you could shift the POV as the story goes on? There's really no need to go back to the same scene; one POV is enough.
But other than that, I think this fic is really good! AFF.net failed on me when I going to chapter four and I panicked! Anyway, I got back after twenty minutes.
When are you going to update? I really like to see how they would get together and ... erm, make their thoughts reality. ^__^
Napolde
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww cool chapter
can't wait for the next
can't wait for the next
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely glad to know you will be continuing this. The story is great & you do an exceptional job of portraying the tension!
Looking forward to the updates!!!
Looking forward to the updates!!!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I'm just here to tell you. UPDATE!!!!PDATPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!! THIS STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME AND YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN LIKE.. FOREVER!!! IT IS YOUR SACRED DUTY TO UPDATE!! NOW! Thank you. ^^
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have to write more. i'm going to die if you don't. it's amazing. i get the whole americanized feel. i think you're wonderful.
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. It's stories like this that gives romantic novels back the romance. Please keep going. And email update me if you could. Absolutely beautiful.
Annie ; )~
Annie ; )~
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um why are you taking so long to update?? its been like forever and i really love ur story
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I hope you update it soon.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey mate are you ever going to finnish this story?
I love it and I come back every few months to see if you updated.
Please do it soon, I going crazy not knowing how it is going to turn out!
I love it and I come back every few months to see if you updated.
Please do it soon, I going crazy not knowing how it is going to turn out!
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now this is a story I like. Cool plot, though slightly repetetive with the dual point of views, but it does an excellent job of developing both Harry and Drake\'s personalities. Um not quite sure why you stopped working on this one, but if you ever feel like picking it up again,. . . . PLEASE DO SO!!!! We want some good stuff :P Not that the story isn\'t good in itself, its just a tad too short for my liking!!!! Keep writing, and thanks.