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by GertrudeFlint

person Ellen
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and post some more! This is fabulous--I\'m as impatient as Draco!
person ScarlettWynter
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MMM that was absolutely delicious. What a lovely little world you\'ve created, don\'t stop writing I need more!
person I love Malfoycest
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This was so sexy sweesweet. plz do more chapters! Get to the December chappie ASAP.
person Seva
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its me, the repeat reveiwer again! :D and for as long as the story\'s this fabulous I\'ll continue to do so!

The lemony goodness! ohhhhhhh....the lemon....*pants* that should SO not be that enjoyable. lol, great writing m\'dear! Your naieve narrative works so well! Like the story\'s being told by Draco\'s shadow!

Eager as ever,

***Seva***
person Annabel Lee
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is looking to be absolutely gorgeous. Pairing Draco with Dobby squicked me out, but otherwise it\'s all good. Very interesting fic, I love it!
person Ellen
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And???? What happens next??? It can\'t just end there--it\'s too good!
person Seva
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well....I\'m not really sure how to start reviewing this!
I have to say'm t'm thoroughly enjoying immersing myself in this pure-blooded world you\'ve created...you have a vast talent for creating belivability! (is that even a word?!) :D fantastically written!

my problem reviewing is that this is one of the few stories that I\'m not \'enjoying\' for smut-related purposes, and so my usual kind of \'oh that was so hot\' type thing just wouldn\'t wash, or indeed make any sense, and so I\'m a little rusty on my praise for a stunningly original and detailed storyline!

To be slightly less eloquent, i love this story! From just reading the warning type bit I never thought I would, imagining some squicky-ness about Draco\'s age etc, and generally only going in for the whole HG/SS thing, but it really is just captivating!

Very VERY eagerly awating an update, (and grinning at the note of thanks my first review reccieved!)

***Seva***
person crawfoc99
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is starting to take on a wonderful tone. I can\'t wait to read the next instalments. I love Lucius/Draco fic and your story looks like it will be one of the most enjoyable and hopefully smutty ones. Your character backgrounds are excellent.

Regards,
crawfoc99
person Halatia May Potter-Black-Snape
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WI caI can\'t wait to read more. That was just.........wow. The premise is really set up. Please update soon, I\'m dying to find out what Dray experiences.

Hal
person Capnnudity
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I really dig the story - the Visiting concept is awesome! Keep it up, and give MORE!!!