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hey! this story is great!!! what has happen to it's writer?? please finish it!!! Please!!

I love this fic!

Holy moly, that was some HOT scene in chapter four with Marcus and Draco. I can't get over it, it was so much hotter than some of the stuff out there that actually involves penetration. And the writing itself is superb, absolutely stunning. And the idea behind it for Pureblood society and the almost play on words with 'keeping pure' and 'pureblood', its a totally knew concept of the word. Draco, wouldn't he be at the height of pureness because he's unopened currently, and supposedly untouched, and of pure blood? The idea of visiting and what not, while hot, it kind of goes against a traditional view of pure where one is not touched until they marry and then only lie with that person, whereas your world totally is the opposite of that but still gives them the essence of pureness in doing so! Its contradictory, but such and oh-so-good contradiction that works so well!!

I read your note from 2006 and being that it is now 2008 and rather take it that you have given up work on this fic, and I know what its like to not want to give up on a fic but just to not have the inspiration or time or whatever it is to work on it, because I have a great many number of unfinished works that haven't been updated in ... years. But, I urge you to reconsider giving this fic a shot. It's such a great idea, and your writing is soooooo good. And don't even worry about not living up to 'previous standards' of your writing because seriously this is amazing and any contribution to extending this would be great!!!

OK, enough babbling for me, I hope you find your muse!
~gorgeousbowneyes

Please write more of this story.

The characters are amazing and the writing, sublime.

I suck at these reviews, but I'm willing to beg.

please

Good to hear you are trying to bring it back :) Keep up the hotness!

Exquisite one of the best stories so far; can't wait to see what happens later in the story, hopefully he'll take his aggression out on potter before all is over and done with.

oh, pleas finish this! It's one of the best fics I've read in a long while, and trust me, i read a lot of fanfiction.

Holy crap! The Marcus/Draco scene was amazingly done, I'd like to see where that goes.

this storys really good u need to write more

I love this fic! Please continue it, I really want to know what happens next!