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by Elehyn1

person Herald Soucree
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snorts and giggles* Ooh, that was great! I just saw that movie the other day, and Snape\'s thoughts are just too much. I can see it now:

Severus: \"Mr. Potter, ten points from Gryffindor for disrupting class.\" \'Now bend over so you can receive your punishment.\'
Harry: \"Mep!\"

Or another good one!

Severus: \"Detention, Mr. Potter! Be here at seven sharp. Bring plent of ink and parchment.\" \'And come dressed as an S&M submissive, while you\'re at it.\'
Harry: O.O!! \"Yes, sir!\"
Severus: \'I wonder if Filch will let me borrow his whip?HarrHarry: \"Ack!\"
person Littlemiss
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo
person Mercurial
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
W0ot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woot woot woot woot woot!!!

Yay! *does a savage triumphant vindicated victory dance*

You bloody winner!! That was great. Please, please, please continue this.

~ Jenna.
person TicTac
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Very* interesting, please keep going!
person n
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more~~~~~~~!!!!!!
person idril.tinuviel
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hihi...it is very funny so far....keep in writing!!
person Kyizi
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LoL! This is amusing, am wondering where it\'ll go. Liking his fixation with the mouth. Heh!
person jj the jet plane
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::snickers:: that\'s he-larious
person Merrideth
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a sure way to scare the hell out of Harry. and a way to justify why Snape has been so rude to Harry all this time. He is just acting on supressed sexual tension. It was very funny. Please continue.

Merrideth
person AristaStarfyr
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this idea! It\'s a wicked twist on the Occulmency skill. I wonder how long Harry will have it, hopefully long enough to make some proper use out of it. heh heh.