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by Elehyn1

person Bemidia
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!! Keep it up!!!
person Raija
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bloodyhell. Thank you so ever much. My stomach hurts from too much laughing. So I say go you and continue soon.
person Neevs
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... God, snape\'s thoughts are just priceless. I saw this one a the pit and got hooked. Keep writing!
person Arwen Rayne
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I like it. I wish you would update faster though.
That was even funny about the nursery rhymes.
person griffendor
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write another chapter soon I whant to see what happens
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to write more!! I want more!! Heehee...Wish I could read peoples thoughts. Great job.
person Raija
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been ages since I have snorted with laughter...but you made me do it. Ik thk this is absolutely great and I would definitely love you if you continued.
person Sky
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, please, Please, PLEASE update!
person Blackrose
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I hope you will continue it soon. Hopefully they\'ll get together. Looking forward to more.
person Herald Soucree
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snorts and giggles* Ooh, that was great! I just saw that movie the other day, and Snape\'s thoughts are just too much. I can see it now:

Severus: \"Mr. Potter, ten points from Gryffindor for disrupting class.\"
Harry: \"Mep!\"

Or another good one!

Severus: \"Detention, Mr. Potter! Be here at seven sharp. Bring plent of ink and parchment.\"
Harry: O.O!! \"Yes, sir!\"
Severus:
Harry: \"Ack!\"