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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a phenomenal story! You have me completely hooked into this plot. Hooked! :) I love the war torn Harry, Severus and his characterization, and I adore the time and effort you took to get them to the point they are now (end of chapter 6).
Incredibly well done too! Far too often, I have read stories that have great plots, but horrible grammar, or vice versa. Yours, I am pleased to say, has neither horrible grammar or plot. This is a very well done story. Good job!
LadyBrannon
Incredibly well done too! Far too often, I have read stories that have great plots, but horrible grammar, or vice versa. Yours, I am pleased to say, has neither horrible grammar or plot. This is a very well done story. Good job!
LadyBrannon
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much. I love the glorious amount of time they spend together. Severus sending Rose on a wild goose chase was funny as hell.
Oh, and can I prase you for how wonderfully long the chapter was? I love when I see an update on a story I love and get to enjoy it for a while. Yeah. Must go to sleep now.
Lee~
Oh, and can I prase you for how wonderfully long the chapter was? I love when I see an update on a story I love and get to enjoy it for a while. Yeah. Must go to sleep now.
Lee~
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such a sexy story!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story. It is one of the best I have ever read!!!! It is quite interesting. Keep up the good work!!
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!! :D
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic. Keep up the good work.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi.
i don\'t usually review much fiction but i had to drop you a line to make sure you would continue to write this engaging story. i am very interested as to how it will progress and as to how harry will learn this new branch of magic and severus\' secrets. More chapters please. i will ow yow your story faithfully and with adoration. Are you going to include any of the other characters in any secondary roles? are they even still alive?????? kill ron! he\'s evil. ok i\'m slightly biased. i\'m really more interested in harry and sev\'s interaction and relatiop. Ip. In well written, inaginative fiction, the dynamics between the 2 make for compelling reading. please keep writing!
may,
i don\'t usually review much fiction but i had to drop you a line to make sure you would continue to write this engaging story. i am very interested as to how it will progress and as to how harry will learn this new branch of magic and severus\' secrets. More chapters please. i will ow yow your story faithfully and with adoration. Are you going to include any of the other characters in any secondary roles? are they even still alive?????? kill ron! he\'s evil. ok i\'m slightly biased. i\'m really more interested in harry and sev\'s interaction and relatiop. Ip. In well written, inaginative fiction, the dynamics between the 2 make for compelling reading. please keep writing!
may,
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see more soon I fell in love with the first two chapters and would like to see more
of this soon and often.
You are very talented and can only say that you have a neww out look on a very good pare lol
Shelley
of this soon and often.
You are very talented and can only say that you have a neww out look on a very good pare lol
Shelley
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok you are doing a good job but the lack of explaining on some things is quite infuriating. Sev\'s codition is one. You are implying many things some with \'not feeding\' and some for other reasons. You just need to elaborte on things to help the reader undend. nd. Well update soon.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still no update?! ;) Do you have a list or something I could join to notify me of updates? Any ther fics?