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Thank you for the update!!!!! This chapter was worth the wait. At least Harry and Severus had some time to play before they have to get back to the fight.

Oi! I love this fic!!! You have no idea how bad I\'ve wanted to read an HP fic with vampires in it. You\'re actually makes sense and isn\'t immature or written foolishly. I love it! Please continue with more?

I have never been so captivated by a story as I have been by yours. You are truly an artist of the English language and, if you haven\'t already, should consider a career involving it in some way. My only critique is that you tend to repeat yourself in certain parts of the story. When you write about when Harry and Severus are about to fall asleep and summon the blanket, your readers are going to automatically assume that it is by wandless magic at this point. You do not need to include that Severus does it wandlessly any longer unless you just wish to do it for the extra clarification. Other than that, your story is truly amazing and I have not read a story so captivating since I picked up the first of the books nearly six years ago. Having such a way with then English language as you do is a true gift; use it well. You are an extremely good author and I do hope that you update soon. If it is not too much trouble, could you please e-mail me when you update? I have spent three and a half hours over the past two nights after work reading this one story and I would love to see how it ends. Thank you.

~*~SavvyCCU~*~

all i can say is brilliant. enough said brilliant! please update soon so need more of that... so brilliant.

Miki

I'm really enjoying this story. You're doingreatreat job of character development, nothing is too rushed! I like that their relationship is developing a "realistic" pace (well , realistic for a magical world). The descriptions of the magic and the type of vampire Severus is were very creative. This whole stoas ras really sucked me in and I hope that you will continue to work on it and post many more parts!!

Thank you for sharing.

hi there,
really great story. i like the vampire sev ...all those secrets they both have. Please continue writing, you can't just leave them there.

I have been following this story since chapter one and I just ador. Th. There is never enough Vamp Sev in the world. Since I am utter crap at remembering to give feedback I thought I would take this chance to say how much I love this story and hope to see more soon. I just wish (not that I have any rooom to talk) it could be written faster. *sigh*

BTW You might want to check the formatting on chap 9 the entire story is underlined.

Oh dear GOD that was good. Please please write more soon!

This has got to be one of, if not the, most amazing story I've read so far. I couldn't stop reading it, and I need more. You're doing an amazing job of writing so far, and it's so real that I can imagine it being part of the original Harry Potter series. Please, continue to write more of this wonderful story, I don't know if I can live without it. Thanks for giving me something worthwhile to read in my spare time. You are the greatest.

This has got to be one of, if not the, most amazing story I've read so far. I couldn't stop reading it, and I need more. You're doing an amazing job of writing so far, and it's so real that I can imagine it being part of the original Harry Potter series. Please, continue to write more of this wonderful story, I don't know if I can live without it. Thanks for giving me something worthwhile to read in my spare time. You are the greatest.