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for Crossing the Line

by Redrum

schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry that you don't write anymore but I love your story Crossing the line and would love to read the end of it. If you ever do update you will have one happy reader here.
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sigh- I thought I would never argue this again but...
Do you know by chance who was the first one that came up with the idea that the bicorn was a horse (two-horn unicorn)? I know it wasn't described on the Lexicon so I went looking. I found out that whomever started that is wrong... sorry.
The real beast is much, much scarier- it's a demonic black panther by the way- sort of a two horned griffin. There's an online monsterology website if you want to see it for yourself- I forgot the site's name.
The originator of this particular bicorn just created a large man-eating... goat.
person Makovaso
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glares at last few paragraphs* Dammit, why does the beautiful one always have to be such a jackass??? Oh well. Sev will know he's coming. That's a plus, I think.

Nice to see that the two are finally starting to be happy, and that things are, apparently, improving. Rose, somehow, was not a surprise. Lucius preparing to go after Harry is, but isn't... and may I just add a "gah!" at the idea of him curled up around Voldie's leg? *adds the "gah!"* And also a "yitch" shudder. *shudders*

So, vampire army, ready in a week; bad teacher in Hogwarts yet again (what is it with Dumbledore and his piss-poor teacher choices, anyhow?); and Lucius prepared to attack. Hmmm... looks like the next few chappies should be interesting.
person margryt
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a great story, but when are you going to update again? This is such a great story!! Please finish it!!
person Zanris
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter! Besides very well written..ahem.. \"naughtiness\", the characters have fallen into their repsective personalities very well. I love that Sev and Harry actually truelly care about each other. The story is really starting to speed up! Please update soon and keep up the great writting (PS: great portrayal of vampires ;)
person brinian
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really lovely. I\'m not usually a fan of vampire fics, but the character development in this one is excellent.
person alliekatgal
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I read the beginning of this a while ago, but I just read all twelve chapters and it simply keeps getting better! Looking forward to more!
person Morgan Le Fay
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!!! impatiently waiting for the rest of it!!!
person pinktarg
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Your writing style is easy to read and flows like waves and the plot is intriguing and engaging. I is obvious that you have spent much time and care in your writing. I look forward to future updates.