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for 4 lions, 2 serpents

by Johnnyjosh

person Pandora
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Fred and George are crazy to do that in a way where they could be so easily caught! But as they said, that\'s half the fun. XD
person pandora
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe!! I like how you build up the tension in part 3, slowly letting each person into the room.

Guesses? Well, judging from the billowing cape and the fact that they\'re in the dungeons and Snape has been mentioned several time, I\'ll guess it\'s snape.
person Japhia
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! You suck! Cliffhangers are horrible but it\'s such a great story! Something tells me that It was Snape but why would he be sulking? So perhaps it\'s someone else....like Percy or Nevil....Oh I would die if it was another Weasly. -.- Once again email when you update.
person Japhia
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HA!!! I TOLD YOU!!! I knew he would show up at some point!!
person Christine C
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well well well. . .

This certainly is a departure, JJ, but as usual, more than up to snuff. Quite lovely, thus far, and I can\'t wait to see more.

^_^

person Japhia
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! AND EMAIL EM WHEN YOU DO!!
person Pandora
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
D*mn, now I really want to see what happens! I love Fred and George, and twincest is the best.
person DanaFanel
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...KISSY * makes kissy face at Ronny* twincest good in this case, more please
person Eimear
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a very interesting start... the twins kissing? Ron following the twins? Is Harry following Ron or is he following them all? More please soon!