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for A Night to Remember

by Manisha

person Keikokin
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heheh Liked the loo bit. OK clothes black silk/satin button down shirt tailored, tight and black leather pants sprayed on...whew did it just get hot in here? woah
person darkAngel
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ very cool.

Oh what to make harry wear? hm...no glasses, tight jeans, button up deep...green silk shirt? hehehe me and clothing never work well but in my mind it looks cute.

Can\'t wait to see what happens next and what you put Draco in ^_~ update soon k?
person chantalmalfoy
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I wnat to know what\'s going to happen at the party. Try for a longer chapter next time, Pretty please.
Update soon. I wanna know what happens!
person pc
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
to the author.
well first of all..i think you story is great so far, i like the fact that you got harry wearing the \"smirk\" it really soothes him. i hope to see moreyouryour work, and continue with this story...i can\'t wait to read what harry does to draco once dat he arrived at the party. will there be drama between draco and blaise, will harry have his \"wicked\" ways with draco in the end....man i cant wait..till then.
keep on writing about draco and harry..i love those two...cant wait for the third movie to come out in june 4th.....yay.

well later.
pc
person Jay
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please don\'t stop here!! Don\'t leave me han' wi' with Draco wanking off!! I want Draco and Harry doin\' the nasty!!! *begs*
person Demitria Miriam
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yum. I want more. Now!
person Jiro ^_^
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jacking off in a public toilet? I wonder if anyone overhears him who shouldn\'t :::cough::: HARRY!! :::cough::: ^_^ LoL. This was really well writen! I can\'t wait to find out what happens next !!! Please udpate SOON!!!
person uris
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the beginning. Please, sir, can I have some more?
person Kitsune
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay!! more!! I want more! i like how harry is sort of sarcastic ^^ ill give you a cookie if you continue!!!