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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This isn\'t my usual ship, but you made a teenage crush seem very sweet. Also liked the Minerva edge. I really enjoyed that story...but I think you could do with fewer expressions like \"love-bud\" because it\'s a bit of a cliche. It\'s quite all right to call a clitoris a clitoris. This is *not* a flame, I really liked what you were writing about.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t chew your nails. Tut, tut.
Yes the ending was great. The only question that I have is if Draco and Hermione have a future together. I guess that is up to our own individual interpretation.
McGonnagall being the one to set up the spell was a hoot. Her mask was that of the sexually uptight spinster. I guess she\'s a little hot-blooded after all. I also wonder who her head boy was. That would be interesting to find out.
Cheers dear. Fun fic!
Yes the ending was great. The only question that I have is if Draco and Hermione have a future together. I guess that is up to our own individual interpretation.
McGonnagall being the one to set up the spell was a hoot. Her mask was that of the sexually uptight spinster. I guess she\'s a little hot-blooded after all. I also wonder who her head boy was. That would be interesting to find out.
Cheers dear. Fun fic!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adored it! Keep writing more this great!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was cool!. Please write a sequel taking things out into the open.. And Harry and Ron\'s reactionthisthis new development!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha! nice, love it!!! *applauds*. although, i wish there\'s still more.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehee. That was good. McGonagall.. I wonder who was head boy when she was there. That would be interesting to find out. But seriously that was wonderful. I bet you could even come up with a good sequal or maybe just an epilogue. (I always like seeing how peoples lives turn out) Thank you for a wonderful read. :D
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww that\'s the ending wow i loved it. i would suspect mcgonagall but that\'s VERY cool
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was the best ending to a story that I have ever read. Excellent that.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody Brilliant!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! that is soo good! i cannot say another word i am gobsmacked