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for Mirror, mirror, on the wall...

by Padfoot

schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, honey, I had to review this again and say----why is it over? S? So awesome ending, don\'t get me wrong.... but, I want MORE. Heh. So much potential to that whole thing... I\'ve never liked that Draco/Moine ship before. Total YUMM!
person Selina
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it... Thought it was superb!
person Lady Ashley
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good ending? YES! I loved it...although it\'s a bit gross to think of McGonagall doing that-since she\'s ancient and everything-I could, somehow, see her doing it. Excellent story! :D
person Campy Capybara
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This... this... this story\'s amazingly well-thought out. I really liked it, even though we don\'t know about Volde, about the situation of the war, about anything really, but I enjoy the way you drew the two characters understanding each other because of their silent observation. Then n, tn, this is not quite the angst - but neither is it pure fluff. I really like this. *grins*
person ilnevertell
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was ........... :: Heavy Sigh :: Wonderful!!!!!! You have a knack for writing great sex!

* kudos * That was one of the best pieces of erotic fiction I have ever read.
I am looking forward to reading more of it.
Keep up the good work and I will be there to read everything you write!

~ Jaimie ~
person AJ
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

It was unbelievable!! I absolutely loved it. The part about McGonagall still makes me smile when I think about it. You did an amazing job. Thanks much for a brilliant read.
aj
person saraphina
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot hot and I dont even like Het but wow I may have to experiment with the other team just to see. Hot!
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. well written and very entertaining
person lucinda
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that fic was amazing!! The idea was brilliant, very clever. I\'d love to see a sequel! How about it?

Lucinda
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person moony_reader
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I loved that! And that sex scene was very, very good. Sexy but also realistic. \"She wanted to be part of this, not just let it happen to her\" was one of the best lines I have ever read. Good job!! But this can\'t be the END end! I mean, I think it\'s absolutely hilarious that McGonagall is the one who set up the mirrors, but I want to find out what was behind Hermione going to his room to make love in the first place. I mean, in the bedroom she was asking herself if she could love someone that she had just met... buwishwish that you would go more into what happened in the space between Draco undressing that night and her going into his room in this chapter. I\'m assuming that it was a space of a few days... so did they flirt more? Spend evenings reading by the fire? Eat lunch together? Snog in the Astronomy Tower? Please don\'t stop yet... there\'s a lot you can explore.