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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It is starting to get interesting. I wonder if Draco will be able to turn over a new leaf that easily. I also wonder whart ort of consequences Hermoine will have using the time turner the way she did, albeit on the advice of DD. Good plot.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Only thing I have to say is that the language they are using is American versus English. Just depnds on what you are going for, as in true-cannon, partial-cannon, or out-of-cannon. Doesn\'t hurt the story and effect, just \"Americanizes\" it. Personally, I like the non-American language and that\'s only because I live in America! =) Great plot development and foreshadowing. :)