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person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BRAVISSIMA! I look forward to the next story....Kait
person Loopy Loony Luna
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heavy on the Awwwwwww factor. I liked the touch of Neville and Draco both pining over Harry-Pps nps now Draco will stabilize. Great renaming of the hangover potion. Kudos on the hungover professors-I really like it when the teachers act like people rather than automatons.
person Kristine
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sevvie\'s last line, and Hermione\'s last reaction...Bloody classic...If I managed to snag a guy to shag, that is SO what I would\'ve done. Brillian All All in all, if I ignore the horrific image of a naked Dumbledore, then I can happily say that I love this fic. :)
person jordy
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! I liked why he changed the hangover potion\'s name. That was good.
person Bambu
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was really a very good encapsulation of the challenge... with a bit of angst and some misunderstanding and a bit of requited love.
person Linda
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I started to read this while drinking an Alabama Slammer, which is fairly close to Sloe Screw Against the Wall, which made it only all the more enjoyable. I loved the parts with Luna...too funny!! This is a very enjoyable fic!!
person Sonni
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Delicious - completely, utterly and totally delicious. More please
person Jenny
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Responding to chapter 3) This continues to be a highly enjoyable story. Thank you. There\'s not really anything to add to that. :)
person April
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe hehehehehe
this is gr8, it made my day!!!!(which had been really shitty up until now):-)
thanks so much,
Love and chocolate frogs April
person TeaRoses
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you updated! This is a very fun story. Poor Luna. Again, nice buildup and I look forward to the end.