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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was so much fun! very sexy! YAY! A lot of smut and fun PWP is written by people who have no idea how to write -- they can\'t use proper grammar or sentence structure, etc. and that makes it not much fun to read. You can write and give us satisfying sex at the same time! thanks!
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic! I absolutely loved it! The personalities of your characters are wonderful. Poor frustrated Luna. I was hoping everything would work out for her in the end. I\'m definitely going to be checking to see if you\'ve written anything else.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute! There\'s nothing better for that instant zing than a lemon drop shot! Incidentally, and quite humorously, one of the only shots I can handle. :o) Loved it!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very funny, but could you add a note about what happened to Luna and Ron? Enjoyable and real riot to read. Thanks.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this response to the challenge. It was very well written and humorous. Brilliant work. five stars*****
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it! Good job :)
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well that was a very satisfying story! quick, to the point and plenty of lemons! aloha, mele
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(responding to chapter 4)
*grins* Nice twist, the Neville/Draco thing. I like it!
This story has been most entertaining, thank you.
*grins* Nice twist, the Neville/Draco thing. I like it!
This story has been most entertaining, thank you.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing the complete fic... a very satisfying lemon and a fun ending. I really enjoyed this fic and I think you defini ful fulfilled the challenge. I look forward to reading more from you.