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person IrishRavenX
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*poke* Is there an update yet?

*poke* How \'bout now?

*pokepokepokepokepoke*

Severus meeting Severus. Why not. I\'m definitely looking forward ot an update, as you may have guessed. :)
person christy
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM

no please don\'t remove the bunny tails i like them as much as the story they helped me get the the day with a smile, well do what you much but i will miss them alot as for the story its self i am likeing it, it is a refreshing different twist than some i have read.
person XxphoenixX
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE
person laceyweasley
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read the latest chapter. It\'s very good. Thank you so much for continuing with the story. I really love the way you have developed the characters in your story. Essentially Rowlings but uniquely you.

Thanks
person scifichick774
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just...wow. You updated four times since the last time I checked and each chapter was better than the last. I know Lily and James are supposed to be together (for Harry\'s sake) but quite honestly, I can\'t stand the man the way you\'re writing him here and can\'t help but think that Lily deserves so much more than an egotistic jerk.
person Sandy
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the bunnies are fighting back. I really like Chapter 9, but it shows up twice - once as Chapter 9 and again as Chapter 1 San
person Velvetina
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww Severus! I love that guy so much. anywayz i think that this story is brilliant and hope to see u update soon!
person nesscafe
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm and the plot thickens!!! This just gets better and better! The whole Lucius and Pettigrew talk was good! I kept thinking you spineless traitor!!! Then the thing w/ Lily! That\'s not good! They gotta get out of the past before they really ruin things for Lily and James! Then there was the Hermione w/ the hurt knee and ankle and young Severus playing doctor! Man that was steamy and they haven\'t even done anything yet! On one hand I want older Snape to get there fast and get them out of there before something bad happens on the other hand I want Hermione and young Severus to continue!!! I hope you can update again soon!!!
person IrishRavenX
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. Don\'t worry, I believe that the bunnies are there. I had a bunny episode with fan fiction, infact, it was so severe that I had to add them into a story. But that is a different tale...

Loved the update, I even more love the interaction betweermiermione and younger Snape. Maybe Severus isn\'t so bad...only another update will tell!!! (Hint hint, nudge nugde...update!!!!!!!!)
person Sandy
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so glad I started reading this. It\'s not just another time turner - thank you. I love the \'memories\' coming to haunt the adult Severus.