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person Neko Neko
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well this certainly took a twist. :D I\'m lovin\' it though!
Keep writing! :)
person Alicia
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Nice Story!Don\'t Abandon It though!Did you erase some chapters?well Just wondering and just telling you to keep up the good work!
person Neko Neko
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!
I\'ll have to read the rest later, though...
person Alicia
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh great story!Its cool!Write more k?
person alicat
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
?????????? You alreadt posted this chapter???????
person Miki
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I must say that I like this story-line above all your others. I think you\'re writing has imed aed all. ll. (Not to slight your previous works) I just feel truly drawn into this particular one. I am on tenterhooks and can\'t wait for the next installment. Please make it soon.

person Miki
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I must say that I like this story-line above all your others. I think your (where\'s spell check when you need it?) writing has improved as well. (Not to slight your previous works) I just feel truly drawn into this particular one. I am on tenterhooks and can\'t wait for the next installment. Please make it soon.
person Sabrina
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was great. I wasn\xpecxpecting this twist at all. Please update soon.
person scifichick774
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally found the time to catch up with the last few chapters and I love the new plot twist you\'ve thrown in. The formatting is off in the last chapter, but it was still a good read. Looking forward to more.
person Herm
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Just thought id say i love the story!