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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holden, pleeeaaase don\'t do this. Where is the next chap Wh Why are you torturing me? Don\'t you love your fans even a tiny bit? Okay...I\'ll go and eat some breakfast and maybe when I come back there\'ll be another chapter - right? All right, enough whining.
I\'m glad she told him the truth and that his decision not to react to it is solely his own, and not from some \"misunderstanding.\" Hermione\'s thinking of staying...makes me want to shake her.
I\'m glad she told him the truth and that his decision not to react to it is solely his own, and not from some \"misunderstanding.\" Hermione\'s thinking of staying...makes me want to shake her.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Horray, young Severus again. I hope his older version takes a hint!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep Writing!Don\'t keep me hanging!Update as soon as you can!
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No!Not little Ronnie and Hermione!LOL Cute!Lol I was kind of wishing Ron wouldn\'t have been so..well Inexpierienced.Lol But I still love him!LOL
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate Ron, I hate Ron, I hate Ron, I hate Ron, I hate Ron, I hate Ron....
Do you think if I say it enough times he\'ll just disappear?
ARGH!!! Poor Severus. He gets hurt every time. Oh well...waiting for more. Saving my tears.
Do you think if I say it enough times he\'ll just disappear?
ARGH!!! Poor Severus. He gets hurt every time. Oh well...waiting for more. Saving my tears.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No critique, just a comment. Looks like Ron got jealous and really put his foot in it.
Oh, about the bunnies... Tell them, if they give you too much trouble you\'ll ship them to me. I have a lovely file cabinet they can breed in to their heart\'s content. BUT they will never, ever see the light of day again. (They should get along nicely with Itty-Bitty Ooops, Hermioine\'s Aunt, and Remus, Raven and Rus; Three stories I tried to write and never got past outline stage.)
Writing, for me at least, is equal parts pleasure and hard work. I appreciate a good story. Thanks for making the effort.
Oh, about the bunnies... Tell them, if they give you too much trouble you\'ll ship them to me. I have a lovely file cabinet they can breed in to their heart\'s content. BUT they will never, ever see the light of day again. (They should get along nicely with Itty-Bitty Ooops, Hermioine\'s Aunt, and Remus, Raven and Rus; Three stories I tried to write and never got past outline stage.)
Writing, for me at least, is equal parts pleasure and hard work. I appreciate a good story. Thanks for making the effort.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s been a while since my last review so i thought it would be a good time to drop my two cents worth. i must say i really liked the last couple chapters, with the exception of harry\'s problem. seems to be a convenient way to get him out of the story, but then again i might have missed the explanation of why he\'s in a coma. i liked the time travel to the future. that was cool. having snape and hermione see what the future was like in that fashion was awesome. it was probably the catalyst for both of them. i feel sorry for ron, but also very annoyed with him. his announcement at the end was just so stupid. i mean who would do that after the fiasco that happened in hermione\'s room? that\'s just one more piece of evidence about how rash he is and that he doesn\'t think before he speaks. i can\'t wait to see how hermione reacts to that announcement. should cause a few fireworks. keep it coming.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was funny to see Sev debating over what the hell to think the Hermione situation.
Torn between wanting to reprimand a student for impudence and wanting to concrete the images from the future.
At the same time trying to deny it all, until he remembers Ron.
But by merlin if that man isn\'t the most complex being alive.
I think thats why we love him so.
I had to laugh out right when Hermione declared. \"I want you to take me Ron.\"
And then proceeded to boss him about the bedroom. lol, it was very romantic lol.
Only to then be told that it was a huge mistake Lmao.
Mind you Ron did have every right to be angry at that point even if he\'s not a fav of mine,
at least he got over it.
Well he got over it to well for my liking, I thought that they had agreed to put off the marrage thing
and then he goes and announces it in the great hall.
Please don\'t let that deter Sev\' and Her\' from havtheitheir chat, I think I may just have a hissy fit if
much more comes between them.
Oh yeah I really related to this line.
\"He was almost a perfect man and she couldn\'t have been less interested.\"
I had a few friends really great guys, loyal to a fault, good looking the kind you can introduce to your family
and not once when I was approached for realationships could I bring myself to date any of them.
lol the way the cookie crumbles i guess.
Hope you update agin son xoxox
Torn between wanting to reprimand a student for impudence and wanting to concrete the images from the future.
At the same time trying to deny it all, until he remembers Ron.
But by merlin if that man isn\'t the most complex being alive.
I think thats why we love him so.
I had to laugh out right when Hermione declared. \"I want you to take me Ron.\"
And then proceeded to boss him about the bedroom. lol, it was very romantic lol.
Only to then be told that it was a huge mistake Lmao.
Mind you Ron did have every right to be angry at that point even if he\'s not a fav of mine,
at least he got over it.
Well he got over it to well for my liking, I thought that they had agreed to put off the marrage thing
and then he goes and announces it in the great hall.
Please don\'t let that deter Sev\' and Her\' from havtheitheir chat, I think I may just have a hissy fit if
much more comes between them.
Oh yeah I really related to this line.
\"He was almost a perfect man and she couldn\'t have been less interested.\"
I had a few friends really great guys, loyal to a fault, good looking the kind you can introduce to your family
and not once when I was approached for realationships could I bring myself to date any of them.
lol the way the cookie crumbles i guess.
Hope you update agin son xoxox
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was really good u got 2 update soon i loved it !!!!
they\'ve got to get togther!!
they\'ve got to get togther!!
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I miss teenage Severus :) PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I\'reatreatou wou with bunnies, but that seems like overkill. Your story is superb. You\'ve caught the attention of a Hermione/Severus shipper who is NEVER satisfied. Till now. The scenes where Severus overpowers Hermione and it turns into a heated, mutually pleasing encounter is so perfect for them. I hope there will be much more of that in the near future. NEAR future?? :::hopeful expression:::: I\'d beg but I\'d rather see Hermione do it :):)