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person Shellnet
schedule April 24, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Come on you could have got it in one or two chapters if you rush its been years

person Shellnet
schedule April 24, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Come on you could have got it in one or two chapters if you rush its been years

person Kallie
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BLOODY FANTASTIC! Best Snape/Hermione Story I've Read In Some Time. I Hope You Plan To Update. I Mean You Last Updated On 2004-10-23 & Last Edited 2005-01-10...That Some Time Ago. I Don't See It Listed As Complete Or A Sequel (Else I Some How Missed This). This Story Fantastic Please Update (I Fought To Keep Myself Awake To Finish Even Though I Was Falling Asleep At My Computer)Just To Finish The Hole Thing & Not Fall Asleep Wondering About The Ending.PLEASE UPDATE!. I Love This Story So Good Plus The Plot Kicks A**. Great Job!
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Garbo
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dear holden, it was just such amazing when i found your story by accident three days ago and, it has been even more amazing to enjoy it by finishing reading this morning.

i ust wonder whether the story actually ends at chapter 26, are you going to write continuelly and when we shall see what would happen next. plus, why cannot i see the 'chapter 17'? 'seemed that it's been missec here, hasn't it?

so far it is the best one of all the harry potter fan-fiction i ever read. severus snape is my favourite character in harry potter series and it is obvious that you successfully make him more lively and lovely. thank you for the exellent fiction! and wish there'd be more fancinating stories coming next:) Garbo
person Lisa
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is rather good but the transition between chapter 18 and chapter 19 needs some work... its jsut a bit confusing! I love it though... it seems as though you may have abandoned it... thats sad to hear but i did enjoy what was finished
person Lulu Malfoy
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could u do this to us??? U just simply dig a big hole and let us falling into it!
Come on dear, u are really good!!!! Could u pls just finish the story in one capter????? Please...........
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person glorianne
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where are the bunnies?!!! BRING OUT THE BUNNIES!!!!! you have update! you must, you must, you must! i\'m dying! PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSEEEE! (this is me bringing out the over dramatics) i love this story, i will die without your story! bye bye! E:3 carrots