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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hot
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good but I could have been hotter. You could have made the sex scene longer though
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. Very good. I liked this story. It was really sweet. Stories like this one are what make me love indulging in my guilty pleasure of this pairing hehe!
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one that had a \'Wizard of mom moment every time Snape called Harry \"pretty\"? If he starts calling him \"my pretty\" I\'m gonna run, and take Toto with me.
Otherwise I liked the mood, just don\'t rush it too fast.
Otherwise I liked the mood, just don\'t rush it too fast.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool Update soon. I am liking the way your story is heading and chapter length is good. You always want to shoot for over 1,000 words.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it is a little short. I would have liked a little romantic buildup. Cards and flowers. It\'s too much like bath house sex.