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for Swing, Swing, Swing

by Desertrain

person Shenoa
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was so sweet! Idn\'dn\'t need any R or the works. It\'s fantastic. *sniff sniff* So sweet *sigh* ^_^
person Meg
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was cute!! I\'m glad you decided to marry them, because it was the perfect ending te ste story, even if they did die. hehe it was sweet though. Keep it up.
person Jes
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. One of my new all time favs. It actually made me sigh at the end, lol. First one to do that :P Keep up the great work. Definitely looking forward to more
person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do know that you are just plain evil right, ;) I was like: Oh my God, oh my God, a second chapter! EVIL!

Now that I\'m here I\'d like to say that your story is one that sticks. If you read as many fics as I do you forget most of them after some time. But this one keeps sticking. Especially the ending. *snif*
person gl
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story rocks! i liked it but the whole going at it like bunnies wasn\'t to bad either also the snape in leather wasn\'t a bad mental image can\'t wait tad aad any of your other storys!
person MJ
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww that is SO SO SO Sweet. I love it.. such a great concept. It reminds me of a poem I once read in a chicken soup book called smile. Great job!
person fallen heart
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this story was cool and all i enjoy reading it make more please
person Eimear
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really sweet. I think it has to be in the top ten...
person Ellen
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but I\'d like it better if you left it more open ended. Set up their relationship and then leave it up to your reader\'s imagination what happens later. Or better still--YOU write some more about how their relationship develops. You\'ve got a really good beginning here. It seems a shame not to do more with it.
:)
person Kevin
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That story was truly heartwarming! Completely innocent, yet completely loving. Thank you for writing something of love and not about loving sex. I do enjoy Harry and Draco shagging, but this was a soul touching departure. Good luck with future work.

Again, Thank you,
Kevin