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for Snapey Went A Courting

by Avrild

person Shan
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, but you lost me when it got to the Fairies. However, I will continue to read and maybe i\'ll come to like that part as well.
person mele
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! worth the wait! i never expected such twists and turns... can i bribe you to wraite the next chapter soon? how bout some nice honeydukes chocolates? please :) happy mother\'s day! aloha, mele
person DMS
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Maybe my last review sounded abrupt. I liked that episode of the Simpsons -- Johnny Cash as Coyote the Trickster!

Is deblovesdragon right about Daisy? (Draco with a sex change) I can understand Daisy being sick of Harry slighting her for Hermione, but will her actions have dire consequences? Is her Jedi-like hypnotism the same as Imperio?

How long have Snape and Hermione loved each other? There was mutual admiration back in Chapter 1, but love?
person spaz141
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO, he\'s going to get out too, right? Give Daisy to the Queen, k. Thanks for the update.
person LittleBird
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a great chapter. Too see them both sacrifice for each other and their child. Hope they get Severus back soon!!
person DMS
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
De-ammmmn, girl, did you get into Homer\'s funny chili?

Waldo has a lot of personality for a week-old baby. Does he have hair, or peach fuzz? What color are his eyes? Is he plump or slender?
person Loopy Loony Luna
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Severus still needs rescuing, poor thing. It was very sweet how eaf thf them tried to bargain for the release of the other. I like Erasmus, though I suspect his appearance would be quite distracting. Thank you for updating.
person wendynat
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Loved the fact that \"Smilie\" counselled the Queen to get rid of her because she\'d cause trouble. :) It will be interesting to see hoape ape gets out...
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16... What is going to happen to Severus?!? I know that Hermione will get their son out, but I just can\'t see her leaving him their with that nasty, evil queen!!! I can\'t wait to see what will happen!!! Til chapter 17, deb >^..^<
person LittleBird
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was out of this world!! Nice to see the creative juices flowing!!