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for Snapey Went A Courting

by Avrild

person Nocturnus
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh April, thats sounds like college myths: I have a friend of mine that swear she got pregnant only by kissing her boyfriend!
any case, I do love your stories, you know that, and this is not an exception to the rule.
You make my day, I\'m still laughing.
person shagsthedustmop
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your drunk!Snape is hilarious - and I love the realistic \"hair trigger\" that he had on him.
I\'m looking forward to hearing how sht prt pregnant from having her hand humped, but I\'m sure you\'ve got something interesting in mind
person LittleBird
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, another story from April!! Too funny -- can\'t wait for more!!
person Pauline
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL - ewwww - that Wizard\'s \"seed\" is pretty strong stuff. You do dark comedy so well April. Really looking forward to the interactions between the happy parents. ;)
person mkm19602000
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What have you gotten Severus into now. I think this one is going to be a bit of fun. I wonder how Hermione will react when he shows up. More please more.

Mary Kay
person karen/dedanaan
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heheh,

The whole scenario is hilarous. You wrote them so well as a drunken duo. PHermHermione, though, she didn\'t even get a good shagging out of it and yet still got pregnant. I think I\'m going to have fun reading this one. Lupin was so mean, but still, what a way for Snape to learn about what had \'cum\' of that night. *_*
person Red
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has great potential and Snape\'s lines were great - but I do wonder why Hermione hates him so much and why she had to go tell Harry something like that, and why Harry had to repeat it, but then again, Harry never really does grow up does he? What a childish and immature thing to do.
person Fleab
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you\'ve had a rest. A nice sleep. Had that cup of java? Feel refreshed and revitalised? Good, good.

So....


Where\'s the next part?
person Susan
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO...this was great! Sickly-sweet, drunk Severus is a bit disgusting, just like a real drunk! I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. A really great start! :-)
person OzRatbag2
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now this does look interesting and I do like the way you do a good dark farce. How very clever to have Severus drunk and horny, yet unsure of the implications of humping without actually skin to skin contact.

I like Lupin\'s role as the avenger - seeking honour for the smited maid motif. All in all this looks very intriguing and I\'ll be interested to see where you drag the characters.