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please don\'t let snape be a dolt and open his mouth! let him just sweep her off to st. mongo\'s. i\'ve had my own experiences with pregnancies and c- sections and stupid men to beg for this! aloha, mele

Yes, I would DEFINATELY call this fic \"farce\". It is TOO funny!
I can\'t wait til Hermone explains to Severus that they didn\'t actually have intercourse. That he just shot his load all over her and got her pregnant that way. Too funny!
Please write more at your earliest convenience.

Cheers!

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I don\'t know which was best, Snape the poser with the tablecloth or Snape\'s idea of inconspicumuggmuggle. Both knock spots off Lupin\'s boggart in POA.

Oh I love it. Snape is a complete pompous arse, just the way I like him. This is a wonderful story on so many levels. I do hope Hermione gets her stitches and Severus sorted out soon. Waldo? Saccius? Poor kid!

I love the idea that if the pair of them would just shut up and listen to each other then they might find some shred of a lue about their shared \'past\', such that it is. However, in the farce of it all they are so completely honed in on their own tangents that they just are not seeing any picture other than the one they wish to see.

That\'s very cleverly done I might add.

Snape as Icarus is a clever motif, for I have no doubt that Hermione will find some way to \'clip his wings\'...happily even. ;)

The labor is interesting more for what isn\'t said by other party, than what is said. The righteous indignation is well evidenced with the pair of them and that makes for very black humour.

It is so far very cleverly done and the most interesting part will be watching both of them dig even deeper holes, shore up the battlements and slog it out - literally.

Oh, God, poor Hermione and the house elf situation! Snape is delusional, pretending to be Hermione and then coming up with some completely off the wall scenario for Hermione to have gotten pregnant. I\'m sure I\'d have busted my stitches if Snape had have walked into my recovery room dressed like the freak he is. ^_^

I\'ve been out of town, and got to read all of this in one go... I laughed so hard I sprayed my screen with tea! This is just so funny ... Poor little Waldo/Saccius. What parents, what a name! I can\'t wait to see where you go with it.

Jesus. You sure are humiliating poor Snape. :D Serves him right. ;)

April, I love the way you have taken a serious look at post-natal blues,
the difficulty in beginning breastfeeding, and just how bloody paranoid
you can get when you\'re doing this baby lark for the first time, let alone solo.

Loads of Blessings and thanks, Kait x

PS - Haaaaaaagh! Absolutely LOVED Severus\' outfit. And why not? Canon
states NOWHERE that Severus has a decent taste in Muggle clothes. You
only have to look at OoTP to know that to a Ploodlood, a frilly summer
dress is JUST the thing for a Wizard. All Right, darlin - you REALLY must post
a tea/monitor warning if you\'re going to get any funnier!

Ouch! Well she is defanetly not going to be in a good mood after that!

*laughs* Oh my god! I had to grin at Snape trying to justify why she didn\'t tell him in making out to be a problem with her! She nearly hexed him when it happened, and now with the added stress of having having a newborn he\'s toast! *evil grin* Or at least I certainly hope so! I have one child, no c-section, but I can only imagine how she\'s feeling now!

Looking forward to Severus putting his foot in it!

Tifsuz