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for Snapey Went A Courting

by Avrild

person innerfeline
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Snape rolled up the magazine and shook it at Lupin.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7... Yet another WONDERFUL chapter!!! I would LOVE to see Severus go to Gladrags and shred the entire sales staff into tiny pieces!!! Maybe someone ought to get them a subscription to a mugglshioshion magazine!!!

I am so glad that Hermione decided to give Severus a chance!!! I remember what it was like to see my husband sitting up sleeping with each of our kids, gives me a warm AWWWW feeling!!! If anything was to melt her heart I think you picked the PERFECT thing!!!

I am looking forward to seeing what Hermione has to say about Severus\' \'Goddess\' comment after she flashed him..... did she realize it or was it an ooooops?!? Can\'t wait for chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
person crissy
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know he does seem to be getting a clue, but his foundation of muggle knowledge seems to be so off that he can\'t help but offend people. so funny. i love how clueless and stupidly arrogant snape is in this fic.
person mkm19602000
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are such a story teller. You always leave me wanting more. Personally, the clerk at Gladrags is lucky to be alive. Keep on writing.

Mary Kay
person Bambu
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m awfully glad Severus finally got a clue... he\'s fairly clever in his own right, that boy. And, good for Hermione giving him the smallest chance. You\'ve done a wonderful job of recreating those first exchausting days of new parenthood... even to the idea Waldo and Severus asleep together. this was lovely.
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT is how to end a chapter. Oh, I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Other than Waldo waking up, of course.
Cheers dear.
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, who is this \"Daisy\" chick, and more importantly, why did she say the word \"diddle\". (snicker)
McGonnagall and Pomfrey laid more guilt on Hermione than a couple of yentas (sp). Can\'t wait till they find out the t abo about Waldo\'s (still shuddering over \"Waldo\") conception. When will Snape find out the truth. THAT will be fun to read.
Throw Remus a bone (so to speak), will ya? Love that werewolf.
Cheers.
person amethyst
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My what a teaser you have left us with!! I am really loving this story. A friend is also reading, and if one of us notices an update before the other we send the links. Keep up the good work! Look forward to Hermione\'s reaction for her unintentional flashing.
person yncarn8
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You see, he makes more of an effort and gets an eyeful in return. *Snigger* I am really enjoying this story, it is simply delightful watching the poor dear bluster his way through fatherhood. Lets hope Hermione manages to housebreak him soon.


Best wishes


yncarn8

xxx
person Loopy Loony Luna
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A much improved Snapey indeed! He hasn\'t completely wised up but he\'s certainly going in the right direction; at least he\'s no longer making purchases from the clown collection. Let\'s just hope he behaves himself in the face of temptation. Even without as many funnies this was a very enjoyable chapter which moved the characters along quite nicely.