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Ah, the plot thickens! Another well written chapter lady!

The thought of a \"three stroke Snape\" is pretty horrible, but in keeping with the farce. I really liked the contrast between Harry\'s horror of Hermione\'s breasts, and Snape\'s appreciation of themhrughrugs* It sounded \"critique-y\" so I went with it.

Looking to see how this all works out lady!

Chapter 9... I wish that Harry would back off!!! I\'m sure that he means well, BUT not only is he being unfair to Daisy, he\'s being very unfair to Severus & Hermione!!!

I do hope that Severus can do something positive before the paper prints the story!!! What\'s Colin got against Hermione? Looking forward to seeing what happens next!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<

Colin Creevy a bad guy? *L* Hermione marrying Harry in this story is just so wrong. Thanks for the update, can\'t wait for more.

Chapter 8... I know that Severus is trying & that Hermione is suffering from hormonal moodiness, but I do hope that somewhere along the line they will be able to find a happy medium!!!

I also enjoyed the extra Remus/Alicia portin...sweet & delicious!!!

I am looking forward to seeing if Hermione will become more tolerant of Severus as well as seeing if Severus will make the effort to remember that he needs to think a bit before saying or doing things around the extremely emotional Hermione!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<

::fans self::

goodness me! Realities of birth AND a Remus lemon....I\'m loving this :D Blessings Kait (LovesThePotionBoy)

Yeah! Remus is getting laid. Professor Vr rer really likes him too. (sigh) Good for him. I was hoping you\'d write someone for him.
(Still want to know more about Harry\'s Daisy. It\'s not Draco with a sex change, is it?)

Severus and Hermione are progressing slowly but surely. Too slow for his tastes, I\'m sure. At least she said he could come back the next day. How is that going to pan out? And when is he going to find out the truth? That is going to be so interesting.

Don\'t have any concrit to tell you. You don\'t need any. The fic is fun and as always, well written.

Cheers!

sigh... i wished my ex husband thought i was beautiful when i was pregnant. or even after. i did have a friend who was completely enthralled with pregnant women. he kept sighing and telling me how beautiful pregnant women are. this story reminded me of him. my ex however did compare me to a cow. maybe that\'s why we\'re not married anymore? giggles. anxiously awaiting more chapters. aloha, mele

All babies are born with an instinct to survive. When hungry, they cry. When wet, they cry. When feeling alone or cold, they cry. But they also have another survival technique: the potential sibling alert. When they sense possible amorous intentions occurring between their parents-- they cry.

You said it sister!

Thank you for the lovely chapter. I love the \'new\' charming Snape, especially when hints of the old gormless Snape show through. A perfect blend in my opinion. The Lupin lemon was perfectly wonderful. I guess the wolf never fully leaves him.

What a lemon, yikes - I think I need a glass of water. Severus and Hermione are a funny pair - loved the sibling t.
t.

On breast feeding...I once had a woman walk up to me in the mall (baby and breast were both covered by a receiving blanket) and tell me it was disgusting to do \"that\" in public. I told her \"don\'t look.\" I find it encouraging all the pro-breast feeders in fan fic world.

thanks for writting, I really look forward to your updates.

The crying thing is right on! It\'s fun watching Hermione and Severus try to out manouver (sp?) each other! Apparently Vector got a great big surprise pae ofe of her own! *laughs* Love it and looking forward to more!