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Chapter 10... Well now I understand why Colin is acting the way he is!!! I hope he knows the saying... payback is a bitch;-)

H may may want to hold off on breaking things off with Daisy!!! He seems to be in a bit of a rush!!!

I am hoping that Dobby will be able to take care of things for Hermione!!! I never thought I\'d see her be fearful of the house elves, but can\'t blame her considering!!!

Looking forward to chapter 11!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<

I had reviewed here last night only to have it go lost in the ether. Grrr.

I love the contrast between Harry and Severus. Harry, who should be concerned for Hermione, only wants to marry her so he can be father to Waldo. Frankly that disturbs me a bit and I\'m of the opinion that Hermione and Daisy should box Harry about the ears. Severus, who has every right to only be concerned with Waldo, is genuinely attracted to Hermione and looks forward to marraige with her. He is also already a wonderful father to Waldo, though hints of his former clueless state still peek through from time to time. Hermione\'s behavior does not mesh up with her former portrayal, but given that she\'s a new mum being flooded with hormones and afraid for her precious baby I believe her behavior is to be expected. I would be worried for Waldo as well. Remus\' defensive behavior is getting a bit shrill- hopefully he\'ll get over himself now that he has a love interest.

I think Sliewyck must be a house-elf who is up to no good. Hopefully Severus will have the sense not to leave Hermione alone with Waldo. Thank you for explaining Colin\'s behavior. Once aggain I will wait impatiently for the next chapter.

When I first read Sliewynk I was like \' I missed a chapter\' then I even went back to double check to see if I had. Nope just my mistake only a new character. I keep thinking that it was an owl that Hermione owned. I like this story.
I just couldnt stop laughing, thinking smooth Severus smooth. So pureblooded. still hope for him yet. but he is fun in this story.
As for Hermione you just want everything to be alright for her, after all the things she went through.

Well April, I read chapter 10 before you posted... just before. If the question was \"is Hermione too much OOC\", then I would have to say no. She is confused and extremely hormonal after having Waldo. Also paranoia is common for new mothers. Post-partum depression is common and that is a symptom. I don\'t understand what is going on with the house elves, but I am sure that you will let us know in upcoming chapters.
Any new, first time mom can be overly protective and weepy with their new babe. I can \"see\" her being way way.
Want to know more about Daisy. I hope Harry doesn\'t ruin a good thing.
Alicia is nervous to be in public. Remus is just too delish.
Sorry that I couldn\'t help in a timely manner. Maybe next time if you ever want my opinion again.
Cheers.

So many questions? Who (or what) exactly is Sliewynk? Is it a house-elf or perha cat cat? What is up with Colin Creevey? You will have me on pins and needles until the next chapter, when I hope at least one of the questions will be addressed.

I so enjoy your references to the sordid little truths about early motherhood. Harry has no business courting Hermione if leaky breasts bother him-at least Snape appreciates her more rounded physique. Please have Hermione give Harry the boot sooner rather than later.

Are Dobby and Winky going to kick some ass? ...and where can I get some of that lotion for my soar pregnant body? Thanks for the update.

I think the chapter was great. I can see Snape pinching his nose in the middle of the pandemonium. You set the scene well and you create a picture in my mind. I love this story.

Mary Kay

WTF? Who is Sliewynk? First thought was, one of the nice lady lawyers, but their first names are Ivy and Ernestine.
\'s \'s so sweet that Severus thinks Hermione is one hot mama!

I get the Galaxy Quest reference! One of the cut scenes is Alan Rickman (as Alexander Dane) doing a thespian exercise, trying to get the rock monster\'s motivation. He starts out \"I am a rock\" instead of \"I am Hermione Granger\".

aprilgrey! what\'s happening? is that how snape wins the woman? clever, very clever... can\'t wait for updates. oh, wait. no, must wait for updates! yes, lovely, lovely chapters! aloha, mele

aprilgrey you are a goddess! you never make us wait for updates! waiting anxiously for some silly ineptitude from snape and his couip oip of hermione. aloha,mele