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for Snapey Went A Courting

by Avrild

person innerfeline
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Highly creative and freaky! :-)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15... You have one hell of an imagination, these creatures sound quite interesting!!! Bunch of bizzare & horny buggers aren\'t they?!? Why isn\'t Hermione being as affected as Severus?!? I can\'t wait to see how they him him away from the being!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
person SolitaryAries
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles innocently* I love this story :-D wasnt what i was expecting when i read the summary, but it\'s so great. and as for the little copulating pixie things? wouldnt you be shagging left and right if your genitalia were 3x the size that proportion calls for?
person spaz141
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that was just freaky - I may have nightmares. Yikes. Brilliantly written, thanks for the update.
person Loopy Loony Luna
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. You obviously have an extremely well developed imagination. I am astounded at the level of detail you are able to use in describing such a bizarre world. The references to Wizard of Ox and Bosch were extremely appropriate.

Poor, poor Severus. I do hope the cavalry is on its way.
person Susan
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, if I had ever actually taken acid, I am pretty sure this would have been the trip. LOL. Very apt naming and still just a wonderful story. I am dying to see where this ends up!! Loving your imagination :-D This chapter was particularly visual. I truly felt that I was seeing what you must have seen when you wrote it. I don\'t often say that. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.
person Demonicl
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is there something special about Hermione\'s arms and hands that scream \'hump me\'?
And poor Sev, having to doethiething so errotic to that....ick. This is definately something that would call for a good oblivate, if not the rest of their lives spent in St Mungos.

Very disturbing chapter but as usual good job.....loved it (although I\'m beginning to wonder if your on cold meds and how much youve taken while writing this.

Looking forward to the next chapt

DA
person Susan
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn it. I posted nearly the same review twice because I thought AFF copped out. Please delete this and just pick one of my reviews. LMAO.
person deblovesdragon
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good thing that I haven\'t smoked anything illegal in years, or that would have majorly f*cked with my head.
A facinating combination of \"Alice in Wonderland\" and \"Naked Lunch\" in MHO. Fairie land is one trippy place. Not a proper place to raise a baby. They need to get Waldo out of there.
I have not idea where you are leading us next, but I am sure that it will be a wild, crazy trip.
Cheers.
person innerfeline
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I got to read the six chapters I\'d missed all at once, while eating an entire bag of licorice Twizzlers. (They\'re a very important fanfic-reading tool; they Twizzle faster when I get to the good parts, you see...uh, never mind.) Anyway, now I have black teeth and a tummy ache, but I\'m still very happy because *sings* you, you got what I neee-eeed, writin\' Snapey all the time, make him creepy yet so fine...

o.O

I\'m so sorry about that. It\'s very late for me to be up.

Love what you\'re doing with the story! What I like most about your writing is the way you interweave angst and humor and weird things that I never saw coming in a million years. The Changeling child was right frightening. And I LOVE the pooka!