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for I Alone

by SnapesEvilMistress

person Yabo
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job! So, you lost your smut virginity. Now your not only a naughty girl, but a dirty one too. LOL. Keep up the good work!
person silkysoul
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just noticed your story and I like it very much so far. Please continue!
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey fun story.
Just wanted to let you know that it sounds like Jordan\'s uncles had her under the Imperius Curse (cas \as \"Imperio\"). It is one of the 3 unforgivables. (Along with the killing curse [Avada Kedavra] and the Cruciatus Curse [cast as \"Crucio\"]) Hope that helps. I thought it might come in handy for future scenes when Severus defends Jordan from Molly and the other Order members. No one can be blamed for their actions when they are under the Imperius curse.

Cheers.
person Yabo
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Doh cliffhanger you naughty naughty girl you! My name is from a really bad skateboarding movie. I love to skate and ever since my friend saw the movie, she has been calling me that.
person lindsay
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this! write more !!!! lol
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has the potential of being great fun! I love how Jordan told everyone off at the Order meeting. They are really wasting her talents.
Write more soon. Please.
person Yabo
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes continue! ove ove it! Shag! Shag!