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for The Captive

by Faby

person thrnbrooke
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So what happens? Why is Harry jealous of Blaise? Is Blaise a problem? Draco seems soo perfect for Harry. But Harry is like a bird in a gilded cage. What happened to his friends and family?
person katie
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it, true you have gramaticall errors but really all in all the plot is set up well enough. You should deffenatly continur ifr if not I shall be very, very dissapointed and sad. Please continue and update as soon as possible.
--[Kay-tee]--
person sak
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see more chapters of this story. I have enjoyed it each time I read it. I look forward to more.
person Crazy Devilish Angel
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn great great great! i love this idea and i\'m feeling tha love here haha xx Angel
person redsugg
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love to beta read for you i have done it before so it would be no problem please tell me if you are interested and i would love to help you in the future. By the way great story love it please update soon.

your biggest fan
kristle
person Waywren Truesong
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The guilded cage ...

This is beautiful, really. From beginning to end. It\'ll be interesting to see the early months of it ... and what happens later, as things like this never hold forever. I do hope Harry will actually love Draco, tho, as it\'s plain that whatever else, Draco adores him.
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Honey, if you\'re worried about grammatical errors, read mine! This is beautiful, and you need to go past 5 chapters...it\'s a bitch having fans now isn\'t it?
person Keikokin
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always wondered about a couter ter Voldy died. I like that Draco is being so sweet, tender and loving. I hope it continues.
person jj the jet plane
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s really sweet. I love your draco
person stacy
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding me???? Your\'e sorry for gramatical mistakes? That was amazing! Keep going...now...really, scoot...*pushes you along*